Comments | indygnified: more pwp

optimus_life in indygnified

Jan 21, 2009 00:21

Because this damn plot bunny wouldn't leave me alone.
Under the cut because it's NSFW
( story here )

Comments 3

anonymous February 8 2009, 09:30:15 UTC

Very nice, but please break it up into more paragraphs, as big blocks of text are very hard to plough through. New dialogue needs a new line. Chris.

optimus_life February 8 2009, 09:36:18 UTC

Thanks and I was half asleep when I posted this. And forgot to edit my post from pasting it over from MS Word.

ext_151296 May 27 2009, 20:09:00 UTC

I can't believe I haven't commented on this so far. I love it! Thank you so much for writing and posting!