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indyhat

Safe - Chapter 20

Jul 01, 2007 18:52

Characters: Peter/Claude-centric ensemble
Rating/Warnings: PG-13
Word count: 620ish.
Spoilers: AU; at most 1.02 ("Don't Look Back").
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the words.
Summary: Holocaust-era Heroes
A/N: Very short chapter, sorry - I'm leaving on vacation first thing tomorrow and everything is chaos. There won't be any new chapters for a week, I' ( Read more... )

fic, safe, heroes_fic, heroes, mohinder

Comments 39

futuresoon July 1 2007, 21:55:56 UTC

So now we find out what the little guy's been up to! ...not a lot of good, apparently! Nice job with the descriptions here--they get the mood across, and it ain't a good mood, but you're doing it well.

I figured out who Eva was before I saw c_quinn's comment; oh, you clever girl. Such fun with names, you have.

indyhat July 1 2007, 23:17:32 UTC

Thank you - very kind commentary :) This chapter was awfully rushed but I couldn't bear not posting something before I went.

I figured out who Eva was before I saw c_quinn's comment; oh, you clever girl. Such fun with names, you have.

*g* I do have some fun, yes :) And clever you!

*HUG**FRIEND* john_jones July 2 2007, 02:54:31 UTC

I love you!
You so well describe, that sometimes my blood stiffens in veins. I always with impatience expect a new part from you.Thank you))

Re: *HUG**FRIEND* indyhat July 10 2007, 16:02:32 UTC

Thank you! :) I'm really glad you're enjoying it :)

cucumber_k July 2 2007, 03:41:53 UTC

Poor Mohinder, I had almost forgotten about him. Make him stick with Eden, I bet she can get them out.

Luck on your trip, and with your homework!

indyhat July 10 2007, 16:03:00 UTC

Make him stick with Eden, I bet she can get them out.

Well now - thereby hangs a tale ... ;)

Thanks! :)

anonymous July 2 2007, 04:33:35 UTC

"It has a military feel, and this suspicion is reinforced as soldiers..."

Is this the entire sentence, or is this a typo?

...Eden. And Mo.

This fic is thoroughly <3ed.

indyhat July 10 2007, 16:03:25 UTC

Thanks, whoever you are! And yeah, I wrote in a hurry and left that sentence dangling. Fixed now! :)

gladdecease July 4 2007, 21:43:13 UTC

Eden = much ( ... )

indyhat July 10 2007, 17:09:20 UTC

I love that girl. And her interaction with Mohinder. I know you'll do them justice, but I can't wait to read more of it.

Gosh, I hope you like where it goes! I have a love/hate relationship with Eden.

It does look like there was a bit cut out, right where Mr Anonymous mentioned it. What is that, I wonder?

That was me being an ass and writing in such a hurry that I didn't check to see if I'd finished all the sentences (sometimes I think of the next one before I've finished the current one, and in the interests of not losing my train of thought, I usually indulge it). I've fixed it now, though - just a few extra words, so nothing special, sorry!

For example, if you feel like stealing that idea of mine, maybe Eden is in the same Barrack as Meredith?

That's a good thought! And yes, it's an idea I'd quite like to steal.

63 was just a random number, so no canon reference that I'm aware of (but if you can find one ...! :)

I have plans for Gabriel ... and I'll say no more about that for the moment ;)

You've created a world that has ( ... )