Comments | indyhat: Asportation

indyhat

Asportation

Oct 20, 2007 17:48

Characters: Bennet/Nathan
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1,300ish
Spoilers: 1.05 ("Hiros")
Summary: Asportation (n): Removal and confiscation of a person or their property without their consent.
A/N: Written for, and in homage to, fantasticpants; originally posted anonymously here in the rare_heroes Fic exchange. Enjoy :)

( Worthy adversaries are hard to find. )

nathan, heroes_fic, heroes, paper_pwns_all, one_offs, rare_heroes, fic, bennet, morallygrayfic

Comments 27

interpretthis October 21 2007, 23:46:15 UTC

This is the win. Your Bennet voice is...everything I love about the man. ♥

indyhat October 22 2007, 10:29:07 UTC

*g* Thank you very much! Glad you liked. I should probably state, to be fair, that I stole the style, tongue-in-cheek, from fantasticpants ... ;)

interpretthis October 24 2007, 00:22:41 UTC

Well that seems incentive enough to go and check out some of their work. 'Cause yours was awesome. :)

indyhat October 24 2007, 05:42:10 UTC

Do it - you won't be disappointed. She rocks :)

szeretni October 25 2007, 16:28:06 UTC

Love it, very well written! :D

indyhat October 26 2007, 07:19:11 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

Your icon is gorgeous, btw.

szeretni October 26 2007, 07:41:32 UTC

Thank you! I didnt make it myself but wrote credit in the comment, I hope it's still there anyway... :)

mystery_sock November 4 2007, 05:09:04 UTC

This is made of win. I mean the paragraph that starts with "When Nathan looks up at him from the elevator floor, approximately fourteen different and virtually simultaneous thoughts become visible on his face." is one of the most perfectly hilarious - but chilling - things I've read in a while.

How do you manage to do comedy and tension so beautifully, without either one of them swamping the other? Damn, you're good.

Pyjama pants don't really leave a lot of room for the imagination.
Oh, honey, i KNOW.

indyhat November 4 2007, 09:28:01 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. I had more fun than I thought possible, writing this: just tried to put on my fantasticpants hat, and this came out. Might have to do it again sometime, if I can re-acquire the muse.

It means a lot to me that you liked this so much, really :)

Pyjama pants don't really leave a lot of room for the imagination.
Oh, honey, i KNOW.

*nearly chokes on her breakfast* ... I take it that particular segment's gotten a lot of wear on your copy of the DVD? XD

Thanks for reading!

baehj2915 December 4 2007, 22:06:56 UTC

That was... wow.

Well, it was the first Bennet/Nathan I've ever read and using yours as axample, I could do with some more. I also think this fic has had the least dialogue out of any fic I've ever read. But it still flows very well and has a brisk pace to it. As well as being witty.

Congrats!

~love from WI
JLB

indyhat December 4 2007, 22:42:49 UTC

Hey, thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) And I swear, I never intended it to have so little dialogue! Hee.

Thanks for reading :)

fool_of_ships January 2 2008, 07:38:25 UTC

I suspected when I first read this that you were the only one who could have pulled off such a perfect homage to fantasticpants. And now I'm snickering all over again. Great job. :)

indyhat January 10 2008, 13:49:28 UTC

*g* Thank you. I had more fun writing this than anything else I've ever written, I think! And that's a lovely compliment, thank you ^_^