Comments | indyhat: In the margins

indyhat

In the margins

Nov 29, 2009 17:37

Fandom: Studio 60
Characters: Danny, Jordan, Matt, Simon
Rating: PG-13
Word count: a smidge over 1000
Spoilers: Up to 1.11 (The Christmas Show)
A/N: These are just a couple of 'extra scenes' from The Christmas Show. My first attempt at any S60 writing, so I'm just colouring bits in until I get the hang of the characters.

( Danny was on the phone with Jordan )

fic, simon, matt, studio 60, jordan, danny

Comments 10

segsig November 29 2009, 22:56:55 UTC

Yay Studio 60fic!

indyhat November 30 2009, 02:45:45 UTC

Thanks for reading! :)

c_quinn November 30 2009, 00:29:29 UTC

See? If the show had stayed like this, I would've found it much more entertaining. Wonderful use of dialogue here. You got the zippy (yes, zippy. It's a fun word) quality well.

indyhat November 30 2009, 02:43:11 UTC

Well, thank you, ma'am! I love writing Aaron Sorkin-style dialogue. (Obviously I still have much to learn, but ...) And 'zippy' is a good word, thank you.

gingerberrysnap November 30 2009, 05:27:52 UTC

It's been too long since I watched Studio 60 so I doubt quite remember how and where this fits into the show, but the dialogue and whole scene is really great. It's got that Sorkin-esque wit and zing to it. :)

indyhat November 30 2009, 13:19:33 UTC

Thank you! I seem to be attracting my share of z-words ;)

Damn it, I need to think of a plot so I can write a bigger, proper story.

tidbit2008 December 2 2009, 04:01:57 UTC

Too cute *g* Thanks so much for sharing!

indyhat May 20 2010, 14:02:30 UTC

Gosh, I totally forgot to reply to this! Sorry about that. Thanks for reading! :)

pixie180 July 13 2010, 17:10:01 UTC

You wrote them so well! I could see this whole story playing out on my screen, great job!

indyhat July 13 2010, 17:48:33 UTC

Hey, thanks for reading and commenting! :D