Comments | indysaur: rps fic: and behind this door... (2/4) j2

indysaur

rps fic: and behind this door... (2/4) j2_everafter

Jan 28, 2010 23:35

Comments 16

fourfreedoms February 2 2010, 08:32:23 UTC

Hey hey, I like what you've done with the place! I feel like all of my queries were answered, and the relationship seems really organic and awesome. Also, you are the master at banter! I bet Jared and Jensen don't actually sound anywhere near this witty. Why bet, I know!

I was so excited to see what you'd done with the Jared parts, ONLY TO FIND YOU'D BEEN HOLDING OUT ON ME. Instant heartbreak. Although I still maintain that anybody who's watched Generation Kill is going to be like WHY IS BRAD IN SOUTH CAROLINA.

sunnny February 2 2010, 10:45:43 UTC

girl, you do no wrong, damnit.

indysaur February 10 2010, 18:37:07 UTC

Haha, thank you! I'm so glad you liked this.

nilequeenpatty February 2 2010, 16:15:38 UTC

So awesome, totally got teary eyed when Jen had to leave.

indysaur February 10 2010, 18:37:37 UTC

Thank you so much! Aw, I'm glad that little bit moved you. <3

tabaqui February 2 2010, 17:55:15 UTC

Oh, that was lovely. Made me sniffle a bit. Jensen sitting in his closet, Jared telling him he loves him, just....
*sniffle*

When it’s done, Jared’s smiling. Headphones still connecting them, his hand curving around Jensen’s calf. “And now?” he asks. This joyful noise in Jensen’s ears.

Love that, that's just sweetly perfect. And this:
The thing is, he doesn't want to forget. That he has teeth, and claws.

Man, makes my heart ache a little. And this!
One day, he wants to tell Jared, the light bulb will burn out and that'll be the last one.

!! A little shivery-creepy, that. I've never seen this movie, though i know the story, and this is a delightful retake. Really enjoyed it!

likewinning February 3 2010, 03:14:49 UTC

afdksjskf; I am SO MAD that I have to go to bed before getting to the Jared parts. Argggggh. Love this so much. ♥