No! Keep writing, just leave out all the "perhaps". How can you know? Just pick which one you feel is better. Instead of saying, "Shitting in flushable toilets is better, but perhaps there is something good in outhouses", just say "Shitting in toilets is better.", or the other one if it's the one you believe (There...outhouses.). If it is both that you belive are true (better to say), you can very cleanly delete the word perhaps.
kaidye, i love your writing style. sometimes it takes a few times reading over to get the meaning, but that makes it all the better.
also, i have been told by several people that i'm intimidating, which is bullshit. i think people call others intimidating to cover up the fact that they themselves are cowards.
I sat this morning, 12,000 feet above sea level, admist the most amazing mountains that my mind has realized, and read what you wrote in my book. In it's simplicity and detail, it perfectly captured exactly how I feel about you and I.
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also, i have been told by several people that i'm intimidating, which is bullshit. i think people call others intimidating to cover up the fact that they themselves are cowards.
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