Shiver - Chapter Two | I'm Yours

[inevitablefict]

Title: Shiver
Author: oops_pig
Disclaimer: We all know that none of this is real…
Pairing: Jensen/OFC, Past Jensen/Jared
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jensen falls in love with someone that isn't Jared. Someone that is a girl.
Genre: Romance
Author's Notes: I'm Yours | Jason Mraz

Interlude One | Let's Get It On

Chapter Two - I'm YoursI tried to be chill but

Comments

[misskatieleigh]

very nice.

needs a little work on the spacing, but the content was great.

I'll keep my eye open for more of this series.

~K

[inevitablefict]

If you mean what I think you mean about the spacing then it's not going to change any. I like the way it looks, and this was written entirely for me. Hence the reason it's also unbeta'd.

I won't be posting about it anymore on the communities (solely for the reason that J2 never get back together) so if you want to read more updates you'll have to check back here.

Thank you so very much for reading though. It was wonderful of you.

[misskatieleigh]

I wasn't trying to be mean, it just makes it easier to read if you put a space between paragraphs. If you had written it solely for your own entertainment, you wouldnt have posted it at a community at all.

As a het writer and reader, I would look for more of this, but if it is difficult to read, I most likely wont bother as there tons of great writers on here.

have a good day!

[inevitablefict]

I know what you mean about the spaces. I can never figure out how many, or where to put them, and I end up with the longest post ever. I know you weren't trying to be mean though.

Also, do you mean it's difficult to read the way its posted or the way its written? And I totally agree with you on there being plenty of writers better than me.

Thanks for giving it a try anyway.

[dubiously]

I don't generally read het, but I decided to check this out because you said it was past Jensen/Jared. There isn't much fic (that I have seen, at least) exploring the after-effects of their relationship, and how they handle future ones.

I'm curious as to whether or not either of the Js had been in any m/m relationships before, or if that was a first. If so, I'm really interested to see how Jensen reacts here, going swiftly into a m/f relationship, and also how she will respond to the situation, now that he has already confessed about his broken heart.

[inevitablefict]

Well, that was a wonderfully detailed comment. Thank you! I'm glad you gave this a chance.

This is (which you'll find out if you go read the next part) their first and only m/m relationship. Jensen's anyway. And it will be interesting when Charlie finds out who, exactly, broke Jensen's heart. I'm not quite sure what her reaction will be yet. She is a fangirl so on one hand she'll probably squee a lot at the fact that they were, in fact, sleeping together. But on the other hand, she's falling hard for Jensen. It'll be interesting.

I've never seen fic about how they handle future relationships, so I really hope I do this justice.

Thanks again for reading and I hope you read more!

[jenskyies]

Hee, insensitive dudes indeed, but without them she wouldn't have Jensen Ackles sparkling all over her, which she doesn't seem to mind. And yeah, I wouldn't either. Waiting eagerly for the third chapter.

[inevitablefict]

She loves her friends really. They're just trying to get her laid after all!

Second interlude is up. Third chapter underway!

Hope the demon!kids weren't too bad.