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Shiver - Chapter Three | Forever

Jan 19, 2007 22:08

Title: Shiver
Author: oops_pig
Disclaimer: We all know that none of this is real…
Pairing: Jensen/OFC, Past Jensen/Jared
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jensen falls in love with someone that isn't Jared. Someone that is a girl.
Genre: Romance
Author's Notes: Forever | Ben Harper

Interlude Two | Hate Me

Chapter Three - ForeverPeople spend so much time ( Read more... )

jensen ackles, jared padalecki, shiver, ofc

Comments 4

jenskyies January 20 2007, 19:51:39 UTC

Ohhh, I like the connecting the ends of the circle thing or whatever you call it - "I'm not sleeping with you, you know" to "I think I'm ready to have sex now". That's excellent. And he told her about Jared. Hmmm, she's very brave, because that has rebound written all over it. How's chapter 4 going?

inevitablefict January 21 2007, 03:52:10 UTC

Ehehe - you know me and my mirroring.

It does have rebound all over it, but I don't know. It's supposed to, somehow, feel like more than that. I'm just surprised she didn't have a different, more digusted attitude. Ah fangirls. Nothing suprises us.

Chapter four hasnt been started. I'm stuck on the Interlude. It could be one of two things. I'm planning on writing both, I'm just not quite sure in what order I want them. Of course, by the time you wake up and get this I could be done with C4.

stare_at_walls January 22 2007, 11:03:02 UTC

Um. OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.

Erm.

I LOVE THIS. I cannot be coherent because this just SWEPT ME AWAY yes. I liked it, very much. And I am looking forward to the inveitable clash of the Jared+Jensen+Charlie.

Yes. Go forth and finish the next chapter/interlude.

I WILL WAIT. (or else! HAHA!)

inevitablefict January 22 2007, 12:37:02 UTC

Hehe - thank you. I've kinda been stuck for a couple days. After writing so much in so little time, now I can't write much at all, but I just read this chapter back and I think I can write the next bit now.

I'm so honoured, flattered, than you're still reading this. Hopefully the next part'll be up in a couple hours, or tomorrow.

I'm kinda looking forward to the inevitable clash too. Although in my head its kinda going a little different than I thought it would originally.

Will go write now .... :)