committed to being uncomitted

Oct 23, 2008 11:27

dear you;

ball and overbearing chain
you're always on my brain
coulda', woulda', shoulda's
are gonna' drive me right
insane

showerin' me in the things i crave
obliging me to stay
wealth in materialstics wont compensate
that poverty stricken souls empty
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tyler_logan October 24 2008, 03:42:21 UTC
OH.

Wow. Beautiful. I can't even begin to verbalize the array of emotion this makes me feel. A cacophony of emotion if you will. ;)

Love.

*Hugs*

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mama bear <3 inevitablestars October 24 2008, 16:55:34 UTC
Thanks for the feedback, I'm not finished it yet but I'm hoping to keep the same general theme and give it a bit more body.
Big love for you!

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allclichetome October 24 2008, 21:08:09 UTC
"with a girl that you knew
and the bonds that we grew
turned into a ball and chain, ohh

I step into the great unknown,
and a ball and chain I call my own,
because marriage doesn't work in the world today,
It's an institution that is in decay
and if I have love I wish to portray,
I will surley find another way"

this entry reminds me of the lyrics from my favourite Sublime song titled, ironically enough, Ball and Chain.

:) keep rockin it, flailey <3

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what i got inevitablestars October 24 2008, 22:19:03 UTC
only you would be able to tie an amazing song into the theme of my work-rant-chicken-scratch on livejournal.

great song, e. <33

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