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[infernal_rival]

Length of posts, ratio of actions to dialog, characterization, voicing ... feel free to point out anything and everything that I could be doing better. If you're the sort of person who hesitates to use these, please don't fret. You'd be doing me a favor. While I am a new player, I'm not easily hurt, so it's okay to be savage. That said, I would

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[execharmonious]

He's amazing. ♥ In many ways he's the same kind of complex that Seimei was; he wants one particular thing very acutely, and the rest is lost on him. But the juxtaposition of that one particular fierce longing with the rest of his nature, that vulnerability with his normally gleeful-blase-devil-may-care demeanour, is... I feel for him, I really do. Poor puppy.

[infernal_rival]

Muse flailed so hard when he read this that nothing I wrote seemed quite right. For ... ridiculous length of time. But thank you so much for taking the time to comment! ^^;