in memories we're all more alive. true blue lovebirds.

Oct 08, 2009 00:58

Being human is overrated. I've always wanted to be a monster. Reboot my system. Hard reset on soft conscience. Neurons are scrambled. Back to the lab. I will reseruect happiness. Send an S.O.S. back to the mothership. Send me back to where I belong. Heart full of glass. Crystal (ball) clear. Marked fragile and always flawed.


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maybe_redundant October 11 2009, 13:34:07 UTC
your writing is so great and intense.

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infiniteabys October 14 2009, 08:13:30 UTC
I appreciate it. Thank you so much

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joothemoo October 14 2009, 18:07:48 UTC
sorry for the poor comment in the com.

with the picture, it makes the poem even more intense. and real.

the first paragraph/stanza is so good it makes me wish world could read it.
'i wanna be more than just a tired set of eyes' is such a powerful intermezzo
and the line about romantics is excellent, indeed

but my fav one is 'My razor sharp tounge meets the underside of wrists and promises.' That's so brilliant.
I feel affected.

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