[series] 信仰, 1/2

[xdespondence]

Title: 信仰 (Faith)Pairings: Kyuhyun/Yesung, Yesung/Ryeowook (Kyuhyun/Ryeowook)
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: NC-17 (PG-15 in this chapter)
Word Count: 4500

Summary: Jongwoon’s the one who’s left behind. Of course. He’s always the one who’s left behind. (But Kyuhyun comes back for him.)

Comments

[meiixin]

This has just been beautiful, descriptions..everything. :C
My heart aches for Jongwoon especially even though it does for everyone else too. And Kyu of course. Why does Ryeowooks character have to be so...uncertain and mean. DX wahh.
2nd part. eee. I can't wait.

[xdespondence]

ryeowook is a complex character in this, it even took me a while to figure him out c: thank you for the comment! i'm glad you liked it!

[berri_chan]

oh my god! this is so wonderfully written! >_<
it made me want to cry... TAT

[xdespondence]

thank you! :D

[kyusung_addict]

this is so beautiful, I just love how you wrote the characters and how you displayed their emotion and I really feel bad for Kyu and yesung but I reaaly hope that they end up together ^^

(This is their last concert. Their last stage. In Seoul, the very place they met-the place where they began. And Jongwoon can’t process it yet-he’s still numb over it but God, Jungsu is crying and Hyukjae is crying and everyone is crying, the stadium is shaking with sobs, the sapphire blue sea overwhelming and drowning him and he doesn’t even realize that his own face is stained with tears-)

This was painfully beautiful I really wish this wont ever happen, but that's only a wish T^T

[xdespondence]

rereading that scene when i was editing was the worst idea .___. why did i even write it i don't know

thank you! i'm glad you liked it :)

[identityprop]

I didn't even see this until now and just :(((( Heartbreak heartbreak heartbreak. But the way you've written it, even though Yesung and Hyuhyun are hurting so much, you've made me afraid for Ryeowook, who's trying so hard to be the strong one, and his “I love you, hyung,” Ryeowook says, and Jongwoon has no idea how he hears him over all of the noise (maybe he’s just imagining it). “Please never, ever forget that.” seems so ominous.

It’s because ever since he and Ryeowook went their separate ways, Jongwoon’s been watching him-and he has once never regretted loving him.

Jongwoon will never regret loving Ryeowook.

wahhhh.

[xdespondence]

i really loved writing ryeowook in this, you really know nothing about him because he doesn't appear much in this fic, but then once you think about it, he really isn't that complicated at all. thank you for your comment! :)

[cosmoqueen2900]

OMG this is just breaking my heart. I think I'm gonna cry ;_______________;

[xdespondence]

keke maybe there'll be a happy ending~