ISS 2014: for azurrys

Dec 20, 2014 15:45

Title: I only need one heart for my left so that yours can be on the right
Rating: PG
Pairing: Woohyun/Myungsoo
Length: 1,755 words
Summary: In which Myungsoo presses pause when Woohyun’s play button is jammed.
Notes: The title is based on the lyrics from Radwimps’ “Order Made”. I hope you like it! I’m worried that it’s too fluffy and sugary… Oh ( Read more... )

iss: 2014, rating: pg, pairing: myungsoo/woohyun

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azurrys December 21 2014, 05:25:34 UTC
ADFJKLDSFASDF OMG FORGIVE ME IN ADVANCE FOR THE BUTTONMASHING AND CAPSLOCK AND FLAILING IN THIS COMMENT LET ME JUST ASSURE YOU FIRST THAT THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS TOO SUGARY FOR ME <3333

BUT anyway--this fic was just so lovely, but before I go into detail LET ME LOVE YOU for choosing to write Woohyun/Myungsoo because there's not nearly enough of it around and also because the way their relationship was set up fit the tone perfectly. I loved Myungsoo's idealised versions of romance because that just feels so ridiculously him, and Woohyun wanting to keep everything to himself. Their relationship was just so adorable and reading this made me really ridiculously happy <3 Also the ninja!Myungyeol friendship warms my heart and all the mentions of Sunggyu and Sungyeol in general WERE SO PERFECT. Though I'll admit I have a very high tolerance for fluff and sugar I think this fic is just right in terms of it so don't worry about that. Also, this:

“But this means I get to cuddle you as much as want. No objections. No complaints.”MYUNGSOO ( ... )

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tubby_bunny January 4 2015, 05:14:28 UTC
Aaaugh, I do not deserve such a lovely comment. ;_; I have a lot of feelings in general towards this fic because it's my first fic in ever because I had so many ideas that I didn't manage to fit in. Kind of like I had a bunch of ingredients gathered but only managed to use some, which resulted in something half-baked. :( BUT thank you so so much for your kind words and loving it with all its imperfections.

I did think about writing about the other pairings, but I felt Sungyeol would have been too snarky and Sunggyu would have sucked at comforting. He would be insensitive and say things like, "Why are you crying?" while flitting about trying to figure out exactly how to rectify the situation and punctuating every few minutes by jabbing Woohyun with the corner of a tissue box. And Woohyun would end up laughing because Sunggyu is just so very bad at this. I also chose woosoo because I always got the impression that Woohyun would want a pretty equal relationship where both parties are supportive of each other. He has a lot of love to ( ... )

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azurrys January 4 2015, 05:33:35 UTC
I think you do <3 DON'T FIGHT ME, I WILL CONTINUE INSISTING. For a first fic this is absolutely beautiful, so I really hope you write more fics to come. And don't worry, I know how frustrating that feels--I get it a lot too, especially on a deadline xD I know it sucks when a fic doesn't turn out the way you want it but I hope the fact that I love it to pieces makes up for it!

PFFFT I totally agree with that, they'd approach the comforting pretty differently. I love both pairings too but Woosoo was definitely a great choice for my prompt, and thank you for that! (Though can I just say that the Woogyu scenario you're describing sounds absolutely adorable and I would not mind seeing that at all? <3) And ugh that is so spot-on. I tend to write Woohyun in a similar way so I really enjoyed his characterisation c:

And you're welcome, thank you for writing it! I was actually afraid my prompt would be too narrow (the ones I got in return were very, VERY broad and I liked that, so--) so I'm glad you could work with it <3

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tubby_bunny January 7 2015, 02:10:21 UTC
Ooh thank you so much!! I might write more, but they'll probably just be drabbles.

I actually like less broad prompts cause then it's easier to know what to write, especially when it's for someone else. (And I forgot to mention this before, but I'm actually a fan of your fics :D)

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tubby_bunny January 4 2015, 05:34:50 UTC
Thank you for the comment! I wanted their interactions to balance each other out - that both sides could be playful but also knew when to be serious. I'm not quite sure if I was successful in capturing that in the characterisation, but thanks for liking it anyway!

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bexisaplant December 24 2014, 00:13:24 UTC
Ahh, this was so very cute! Thank you for writing it!

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tubby_bunny January 4 2015, 05:35:18 UTC
Thanks! <3

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