ahhh, I wish I could leave you a long comment but I really have to run -- remind me to come back later and quote at you, all right?
as it is: iahfguia8r29ipoajkhfuiajo;kqejhabkfljsg okay this was fucking beautiful all right and I just love it a lot with lou's fear and the flashbacks and oh my god just everything was so wonderful. the other boys were great, and I'm so impressed with both how you painted eleanor and also that you managed to make a totally believable OC (matt) without turning him into an instrument to get larry together. really well done, i'm impressed, dear! <3
no seriously remind me to come back or this will be all you get out of me
oh, wow, this was so brilliant. i'm quite distraught over the fact that i can't leave a comment that lives up to this fic. i live for long fic, it's so gorgeous when done right and this was done so right. it broke me and broke me and then kinda started to fix me again but then, nope, i was broken. it made me cry and when that happens, i know something is just amazing. beautiful work.
I was so afraid n the earlier chapters that it was going to turn into depressing angst with no happy ending (which always leave me feeling really sad) so I really loved how this turned out. Really well written as well :D
I did absolutely love it. I really, really liked the way you had this play out, that Harry just couldn't take it anymore and they sort of unravelled from there, but nothing was ever really truly over and of course they found each other again by the end of it. I also really liked how nothing happened between them while Harry was with Matt because that's just a line that Harry didn't want to cross. The other three was flawless as well. (Liam's "I'm always a fortune cookie" might actually be my favourite line. That and Louis' "What did I just do?" after he came out on stage - especially because it's so quickly followed by "I love you".)
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as it is: iahfguia8r29ipoajkhfuiajo;kqejhabkfljsg okay this was fucking beautiful all right and I just love it a lot with lou's fear and the flashbacks and oh my god just everything was so wonderful. the other boys were great, and I'm so impressed with both how you painted eleanor and also that you managed to make a totally believable OC (matt) without turning him into an instrument to get larry together. really well done, i'm impressed, dear! <3
no seriously remind me to come back or this will be all you get out of me
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I was so afraid n the earlier chapters that it was going to turn into depressing angst with no happy ending (which always leave me feeling really sad) so I really loved how this turned out. Really well written as well :D
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This was really sweet. <3
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