Illumination [s/a]

[infinityuphigh]

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: Fake fake fake.
Summary: “You can kiss me wherever you want, so long as tomorrow never finds us.”

Comments

[mittenlover]

I loved it! Your words, they were lyrical, blissful, a trip to read!

'Paul's eyes are like the Liverpool sunsets...' What charm. I loved the imagery it created, a smokey orange and red end of day. :)

I liked it and I think you should write more often so I can write you more comments.

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you! Ah, those colors were just the pictures I had in mind, I appreciate you catching them.

XD now who's blushing like a school girl?

hint, it's me

[mittenlover]

Aha! Now you know how it feels!

TOO MUCH.

[tssktssktssk]

So much LOVE.

Re: TOO MUCH.

[infinityuphigh]

XD and I'm going to add to the "fank you" for the comment and say

DID I NOT SAY THE USE OF THIS WORD WAS EXCESSIVE?!

-logic win-

Re: TOO MUCH.

[tssktssktssk]

Y YES. YES U DID.

You said love or luv or lover like.. 16 times.
So much emotional exclamation marks. #__#
So sweet.

[beatmy_heartout]

You have SUCH a beautiful way with words and I'm just so happy you so often use your talent with them to write about John and Paul <3

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it <3

[anonymous]

You've managed to capture the essence of love in the best way EVER, and this story has an...inspiring quality to it.
6 out of 5 stars.

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you very much!

[spirit414]

Gah. This was so gorgeous. The words flow together so perfectly and the imagery is amazing. Your writing always hints to something really deep, whether you intended it or not, and I'm going to be sitting here analyzing it now. :P

This reminds me of Shakespeare with way it's written. It's beautiful. I don't know what else to say, haha.

[infinityuphigh]

Awh, thanks :3 I really appreciate it!
XD, Shakespeare's a new one. Hello, new addition to the melting pot of authors!
<3