Rating: PG-13 Pairing: Paul/John Disclaimer: Fake. Anything else you need to know? Summary: Paul couldn't lie to anyone that asked him; the day had started out golden.
I lurves it! I love how things started so steady, but suddenly everything fell into a whirl of emotion, and scenes describing the feelings Paul was going through just washed out upon the page. You did this so perfectly- and I agree on the vultures bit, heh.
Gah, I'm like near tears after reading that. Very good Lorah. -calps- Oh and don't expect this to be the last comment XD I'm still looking for some Ryden. :weird -Melly
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I love how things started so steady,
but suddenly everything fell into a whirl of emotion,
and scenes describing the feelings Paul was going through just washed out upon the page. You did this so perfectly- and I agree on the vultures bit, heh.
ACE!
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Just his subtle way of saying, "EFF OFF." XD
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