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infinityuphigh

We're Both Such Magnificent Liars. [s/a]

Jan 02, 2010 21:17

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: As fake as my hate of NCIS; title and cut belong to Taking Back Sunday.
Summary: Paul could have sworn to anyone that it was an infantile phase. (Also, all the words in italics are things that Paul thinks John will or should be saying to him; while reading it over, I feared it would be a little confusing.)

( So sick of being tired, and oh so tired of being sick. )

john lennon, the beatles, paul mccartney

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panicmydear January 3 2010, 04:47:05 UTC

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Lorah. You seriously astound me. Your writing is so deep and eloquent, and it makes me go DDD: about my own stuff. You're amazing. And I hope you know that. I thought the whole teeth thing was really good. ily ♥

Now you should write about John being a pushy bottom on his birthday.

infinityuphigh January 3 2010, 18:30:05 UTC

Aww thank you bb. I love your writing, don't you DDD:.

And of course, its only just a matter of time until Pushy bottom!john makes it into my notebook XD

Ilyyy

abromeds January 3 2010, 05:12:09 UTC

So very excellent. Rich, imaginative detail and strong characterization. Bravo! Love your stories. :)

infinityuphigh January 3 2010, 18:31:18 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

grl_in_red January 3 2010, 08:05:23 UTC

Ohhhhh, so good. 0_0 Yes I would be interested in anything you have to offer! Abso-bloody-lutely anything!

This was a work of art. Very painful and beautiful and REAL. I especially liked the bit about the glasses being so obvious now, and not something intimate and secret shared only with Paul. Because I did always like that John's Buddy Holly glasses were something only Paul and maybe a few others would see, and that it was such a mark of affection and trust. ^_^ Lovely touch, that, I thought.

Thank you very much for a lovely bedtime read. :)

infinityuphigh January 3 2010, 18:35:35 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad I could provide some good bedtime reading :)
And yeah, I really liked John's "Buddy Holly" look, and only Paul or close friends being able to see sort of gave John this cool enigma.

heylise_song95 January 3 2010, 10:08:28 UTC

yeah!! John never loved her, I knew it!! and He will never leave Paul!!!

infinityuphigh January 3 2010, 18:38:08 UTC

Haha why of course, they belong together ;)

didzease January 3 2010, 10:09:27 UTC

Wow, this was good. To be honest with you, I hardly read any J/P fiction and most of the time when I do I dislike it (don't ask me why, I think I'm just a little bit over it even though I seemingly can't stop writing J/P).

Anyway, the title you used sparked my interest and so I decided to just -ffs- go ahead and read it. Only to discover that this really is pretty amazing. I could feel Paul's pain and disgust, I felt my stomach actually clench and even though my eyes were dry I wanted to cry, more than anything, because of his pain. Bravo, very well done. (Yes this is a bit like a standing ovation ;))

infinityuphigh January 3 2010, 18:41:35 UTC

Thank you! I really appreciate you saying that, especially sine you mentioned not especially liking j/p anymore. I'm just very glad you liked it.

didzease January 3 2010, 18:47:35 UTC

I've mostly grown tired of them because most fics don't manage to spark my interest anymore. They're all more of the same, which is why most of the time I cbb to even skim a story at all. This, however, sounds real and evokes emotion, which I am a fan of -esp. the latter.

infinityuphigh January 3 2010, 19:36:26 UTC

that makes sense; I notice a lot of the same in a bunch of fics, too, but I suppose it increases the value of those that stray away from the norm. I've read some that were posted years ago, I think that were just incredible little one shots, but I wish I could see more of them.

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