Dead Men Tell No Tales [s/a]

[infinityuphigh]

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, no one gets hurt.
Summary: He took another drag in between words, while the ticking of the clock, to Paul, was somewhat reminiscent of a poem he once read. “What’s the meaning in meaning when it outlives who it means something to?”

Comments

[sukha4]

Wow I love it. Very Poe and brilliant.

The clock on the wall seemed to go faster, make its way only more swiftly towards the finish line that only the older of the two could see; it was reflected in his eyes, though, that growing sense of anxiety when one knows he has only a limited amount of time on this Earth to spend with whom he loves most. Paul saw it, as clear as if John’s eyes were pools with which one saw the near future, and his heart sank, giving those floorboards that pulse he was trying to place before.
Love this!

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[ojos_preciosos]

That was lovely. Really powerful, and really sad. Amazing writing, thanks. :)

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you for reading :)

[sweetxrevenge3]

Oh my god.
This was lovelie; so deep, so very deep.
Made me tear up this did.
Oh it's lovelie; I hope you write more storys; they are just brilliant.

[infinityuphigh]

Aww, thanks :) and thank you for reading!

[beagle_agent]

Your icon!!*drools*

Have you got the original??

Astrid

[sweetxrevenge3]

I don't, m'sorry love.
I didn't save the original, I only have this one.
:/

[bello_romantico]

Oh, my God!

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You leave me speechless each time I read your work. You're incredible - really. Honestly, I'm in awe of your talent. You are such an inventive writer - you definitely have a way with words - and each line I read is so compex and beautiful. It seems like you put so much time into each sentence. Gorgeous. Wow. I hope you want to write as a career.

Thank you so much for this piece - it was amazing!

[infinityuphigh]

Thank you so much for your comments -hugs- it pretty much makes writing(however stressful at times) worth while to get such awesome feedback:)

[nicoleh262]

Poe references ftw!! This is very much like Poe's style; you did a fantastic job. Very well done! ^_^

[infinityuphigh]

:D thank you very much <3