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infinityuphigh

What a Tangled Web We Weave [s/a]

Feb 19, 2010 17:30

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, no one gets hurt.
Summary: Although, when enough time went by, the analogies started to get old; overused, as an understatement, fitting them about as comfortably as their suits and ties, collared shirts and trousers as opposed to sleek leather and sweat from a dimly lit stage.

( Really, though, ignoring usage of the word itself, neither of them were very certain of anything at that point in time. )

john lennon, the beatles, paul mccartney

Comments 16

janesaysstop February 21 2010, 03:28:38 UTC

Oh my WORD. Your writing is just so, unbelievably superb that I cannot convey my emotions. Your characterization is so spot-on, it makes me feel as if you were in the room with them at all times. For everyone's sake, PLEASE keep up your phenomenal writing!

infinityuphigh February 21 2010, 03:48:05 UTC

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it!

tini_91 February 21 2010, 09:32:16 UTC

*speechless*

♥

infinityuphigh February 21 2010, 15:40:54 UTC

:D thank you

beagle_agent February 22 2010, 19:42:16 UTC

This is so beautiful and amazing....brilliant work.

This part sticks in my mind:
John's gaze never left him, though, that was one thing he could feel in the darkness, one thing he could always feel; eyes, eyes seeking him out, eyes watching his every move.

Great work!

Astrid

infinityuphigh February 22 2010, 20:59:36 UTC

Thank you so much!