Cheaters Never Win [2/2]

May 10, 2010 19:54

Rating: PG-13
Chapter: 2/2
Pairing: John/Paul (implied)
Disclaimer: As fake as something ridiculous that's somehow related to Pirates of the Caribbean.
Summary: John doesn't know exactly what sent him spiraling over the edge of whatever, but all he knows is that it did, and he's sitting at the bottom of it, the bottom of the barrel, and all he has ( Read more... )

john lennon, the beatles, slash, paul mccartney

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pauliejohnny1 May 11 2010, 13:20:18 UTC
*Bows to your greatness*
Wonderful, beautifully descriptive writing as always.
I wish I could write a comment worthy of this fic - but it would be impossibe, so I'm just going to tell you again how wonderfully talented and genius you truly are.

I hope you have time to write something else again soon, I will be eagerly awaiting your next post :)

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infinityuphigh May 11 2010, 13:46:02 UTC
A thousand thanks for all your kind words :D
I really appreciate it, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

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beagle_agent May 11 2010, 20:11:00 UTC
This is so fucking hilarious, well written and great!

Bittersweet,yes, especially the idea of John at the backseat of that car....

Hopefully you will write more soon, your stories are fantastic!

Astrid

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infinityuphigh May 11 2010, 23:52:36 UTC
Thank you so much!!

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so_egregious May 14 2010, 04:33:04 UTC
You know, you just...

Yeah. I don't even know what to say anymore about your writing. And I mean that in the best way possible.

I read, and I reread, and I'm dazzled, and yet I always feel like there's something I'm not quite getting - something elusive. And that's EXACTLY how I feel about this band, and JohnandPaul in particular. There's something so magic and private and devasting and deep happening that I just can't crack. And that's what you always bring to your stories, and your portrayal of their relationship.

In closing, you are FAB. Case closed.

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infinityuphigh May 15 2010, 21:08:19 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you thinks so, and I'm so happy you enjoyed reading.

Despite the fact I just found the worst typo ever, about the date of the last one. I just facepalmed myself into another dimension.

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anonymous May 17 2010, 23:14:22 UTC
So, (I'm doing that thing where I narrate my own thoughts and it makes it harder to produce something tangible), I'd try to come up with something [well, you know, anything] to describe how much I adored this [adored like Smashing Pumpkins lyrics or Brendon's AOL Sessions hair], but any words would sort of falter in the face of that literary masterpiece you've just created (something-like-run-on sentences means you're making my mind stutter, shush, you). You are RIDICULOUS in just how stunningly perfect you managed to make every aspect of that. You're making me arm flail for the umpteenth time in two days.

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infinityuphigh May 17 2010, 23:18:59 UTC
XD I LOVE YOU, now you don't need to get me a birthday present.

and XD via facebook, i'll help you make up a username that's bound to kick my username in ryan's dick. and then i'll make you post your writing because i miss it and your handwriting

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anonymous May 18 2010, 01:01:19 UTC
XD Okay, I'm holding you to that.
And my writing sucks and no one can read my handwriting. But okay, deal. -holds out hand for proper hand-shaking agreement ritual- I think this'd be more official if I had pants on right now. And a shirt that wasn't Bradley's from last year that advertises The Devil Wears Prada (-rolls eyes so hard they get stuck like that, like in Pokemon-The First Movie's short preceding tidbit "Pikachu's Vacation"-).
Oh, and, to be slightly relevant, this story was one of the best things I'e ever read.
Like, I didn't know it was possible to make the first passage any better, but this seems to have done the trick. So. -salutes-

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infinityuphigh May 18 2010, 02:08:10 UTC
XD dude i'll think of something during like, biology tomorrow. where we repeatedly do worm dissections and the King of Douche is being Douchey.
XD and i thank you -bows- (especially for your Pokemon references) even though i still believe your writing is better, and i like reading it and so does jacob :)

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Wow imhenryviiiiam September 27 2011, 07:47:49 UTC
Wow wow wow wow ( ... )

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Re: Wow imhenryviiiiam September 27 2011, 07:48:44 UTC
Oh my, that comment was very long. I'm sorry.

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Re: Wow infinityuphigh October 2 2011, 22:23:52 UTC
Honestly, /I'm/ the one that should be saying "wow". Thank you so much for your kind words, I appreciate it so much. I'm really, truly honored that you had a good time reading this.

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