Rating: PG-13
Chapter: 2/2
Pairing: John/Paul (implied)
Disclaimer: As fake as something ridiculous that's somehow related to Pirates of the Caribbean.
Summary: John doesn't know exactly what sent him spiraling over the edge of whatever, but all he knows is that it did, and he's sitting at the bottom of it, the bottom of the barrel, and all he has
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Wonderful, beautifully descriptive writing as always.
I wish I could write a comment worthy of this fic - but it would be impossibe, so I'm just going to tell you again how wonderfully talented and genius you truly are.
I hope you have time to write something else again soon, I will be eagerly awaiting your next post :)
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I really appreciate it, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)
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Bittersweet,yes, especially the idea of John at the backseat of that car....
Hopefully you will write more soon, your stories are fantastic!
Astrid
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Yeah. I don't even know what to say anymore about your writing. And I mean that in the best way possible.
I read, and I reread, and I'm dazzled, and yet I always feel like there's something I'm not quite getting - something elusive. And that's EXACTLY how I feel about this band, and JohnandPaul in particular. There's something so magic and private and devasting and deep happening that I just can't crack. And that's what you always bring to your stories, and your portrayal of their relationship.
In closing, you are FAB. Case closed.
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Despite the fact I just found the worst typo ever, about the date of the last one. I just facepalmed myself into another dimension.
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and XD via facebook, i'll help you make up a username that's bound to kick my username in ryan's dick. and then i'll make you post your writing because i miss it and your handwriting
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And my writing sucks and no one can read my handwriting. But okay, deal. -holds out hand for proper hand-shaking agreement ritual- I think this'd be more official if I had pants on right now. And a shirt that wasn't Bradley's from last year that advertises The Devil Wears Prada (-rolls eyes so hard they get stuck like that, like in Pokemon-The First Movie's short preceding tidbit "Pikachu's Vacation"-).
Oh, and, to be slightly relevant, this story was one of the best things I'e ever read.
Like, I didn't know it was possible to make the first passage any better, but this seems to have done the trick. So. -salutes-
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XD and i thank you -bows- (especially for your Pokemon references) even though i still believe your writing is better, and i like reading it and so does jacob :)
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