bloodstained heart.

Nov 08, 2011 20:49


“Love, you're in pieces, there's no one left to lay you down.
Or say, 'it's okay' on the worst night, of the worst year
Though we might fall we'll go out punching.
You hit me like a subway train,
And I'll never be the same.”

"I need to tell you something." It's hesitant, it's cautious. Like he's making his first steps and he's looking around for ( Read more... )

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ltklo November 10 2011, 02:11:44 UTC
and he doesn't even try to hide the fear in his voice because he knows now that Luke can see through him and there's no point trying to mask any of it

Again, such beautiful descriptions.

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snapegirlusa November 11 2011, 18:50:29 UTC
OMG! This is such a powerful premise. I both afraid to go on and compelled to keep reading. I'm so thrilled that you only wrote as long as the song lasted because I don't think I could read longer passages of the pain.

And yet you manage to pack entire lifetimes in these short moments.
Reid looks up from his paperwork, which is sprawled out across the desk that Luke bought him for their first anniversary. Luke momentarily wonders if Reid will burn it.
Yes, Luke knows Reid so well. He understand him, which is why he knows he has to be honest with him and break his heart. He knows it would be impossible to live a lie with this man.

How does anyone say this out loud? How does anyone verbalize something that will ruin their life?
This has to be the hardest thing for Luke. I don't know how you knowing break the heart of the person you love most in the world. But I guess the truth is more important at that moment. I don't envy him here.

,b>Luke stops crying because he has no right to.I love that you included this line. It someone shows ( ... )

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