stops my bones from wondering.

[ingeneva]

One Direction. Louis/Zayn. 3045 words. Sort of explicit.
Not true, etc.

Thanks to Diana, Geena and tamzinrose for letting me bother them. All remaining typos and missing capitals are mine. Title from fun.'s "Some Nights."

Comments

[april_sunsets]

This is lovely! Thanks for sharing :)

[ingeneva]

Thank you for reading. :)

[luxover]

;laskjdf;alskdjf;alskdjfa;lsdkjf this is ace, omg

love this bit, the sort of familiarity of it all: He doesn’t realize his knee is moving until Zayn’s hand is pressing down on it. “You’re making me nervous, stop,” Zayn says, briefly tucking his face close to Louis’. idk, even thought it's not much of anything, this sentence is what really drew me in.

and the bit where zayn's telling louis that he's fit? D Y I N G. so, so perfect. i love the feel of nonchalance there, especially because you can tell that zayn's just thrumming on the inside, even though it's all from louis's pov, and how later, there's no over-the-top romance or anything happening there, no big gestures, just two friends who like each other getting off.

aaaaaanyways. loved it.

[ingeneva]

:D!

I'm glad they read familiar and comfortable with each other, even when they weren't, because I think it's the grandest thing about them. And I am so pleased Zayn's confession, of sorts, worked for you -- it was my favorite bit and therefore the worst to write.

Replying to comments is awkward. Thank you so much!

[hey_whatsoever]

"Can we come back to this later? I’m going to need a few more cups of coffee and a wank before I can make any rational decisions.”

was one of THE best lines I've ever read in a fic <3

[ingeneva]

Ha, thank you. <3

[ingeneva]

Beaming here. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[shoreparty]

I think I love you. It was so believable, irreverent. I wish I could tune into their banter all day. And the pro/con list had me in stitches. Write more, fellow ziam lover :D

[ingeneva]

:D I will try my best!