too sore for sound.

[ingeneva]

One Direction. Lady!Niall/Lady!Zayn. 8047 words. Explicit.
Not true, etc.
Written for this prompt, though it is loosely faithful at best. I have a lot of thoughts about this, but I will spare you and just say: Thanks to Diana, Geena, theviolonist and twist204 for letting me bother them with this nonsense. Endings are hard and this one is likely temporary. All remaining

Comments

[twist204]

I really love the atmosphere of this story, and the way your writing style fits in with it. Thank you for letting me help.

[ingeneva]

Thank you for helping. ♥

[ingeneva]

You touched one a few of the things I was really worried about, so thank you for this comment. :)

[_wheniamqueen_x]

this is SO LOVELy and your Zayn is PERFECT and just that little angsty (just how i like him/her). FUCK then that hot/sweet bit at the end, and how easily niall can get off seems so appropriate to her psgkspfkspfks

[ingeneva]

Haha, thank you! My favorite Zayn is a little angsty too, I can't deny it.

[arcticfoxiest]

“Then she can watch me eat you out,” Zayn says, and Niall’s exhale is sharp and audible.

Okay, that line was so hot I had to take a break and fan myself. Jeez. I loved the easy intimacy between Zayn and the others, like Louis getting in bed with Zayn and them sharing kisses. And the dialogue, it really flowed well and felt believable. Just all around lovely!

[ingeneva]

Thank you! This is lovely. :)

[shoreparty]

Oh man. This is great in so many ways. Especially because I haven't thought very much about femslash before and now am feeling very receptive :)

I swear this is not a backhanded compliment, but it's like in this fic...nothing happens but everything does? (I love that). I think people say that about Virginia Woolf, so :D

Also, you're the best (THE BEST) with touches and proprioception. I never really have to wonder where anybody is. Everything that the limbs are doing feels really natural and true and it lets the dialogue stand out. Like, if I had any inkling how to do intimacy in real life I would want it to be like yours??

My favourite is when Zayn touches the pale ends of her hair. Girl!Niall with the lopsided ponytail makes me mushy inside.

I am also quite fond of Liam in this fic because she is a busybody puppy. And the idea of the bungalow made me very happy in a way I cannot describe. Haha I am kind of shit at leaving comments but ok.

<3

[ingeneva]

Femslash is my favorite of all favorite things. Unfortunately, it is hard to find and sucks a lot of the time. :(

I didn't take it negatively, promise! That seems to be what usually happens! I've learned to stop fighting it and accept that I just don't write actual plots ever.

And thank you. :) I also have no clue how to do intimacy in real life, so I am pleased my fictional version of rings true and comfortable to you.

♥ + :D