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[inheritancesues]

Time for my first Sue-bashing! How excited am I? Very, I like inflicting pain. Today's sue and stu are misplaced characters who don't follow the facts of the book, making them target practice.

FIC -
SUMMARY:Follow the journey of Derek through the magical world as he takes on creatures unknown. leave feedback for me. If you have read this before

Comments

[royotahuyami]

Hi! My name is Angelica, and I'd be glad to spork some sues with you! Yay for first comment!

First off, how on EARTH could Derek get TWO of the dragon eggs, when in the second book, Murtagh(I think I spelled that right) hatched one of the other two. Sephira is another one of them... and there aren't any more! Where are the apostrophes? Where is the plotline?! ICK!

Oh yes, and I'd LOVE to make you a dragon icon! I live for making them!

[fearfulwarrior]

That fic was hilarious, and I don't think it was really supposed to be... :D