SPN fic: Room 3135

Feb 17, 2012 18:58

Title: Room 3135
Category: Gen; outsiderpov
Words: ~1500
Warnings: none

Summary: Written for this prompt on ohsam's comment fic meme: There are a few things you know about the new guy. He is unreasonably tall, his arms are in bandages, and he doesn't talk much. Which isn't a rare thing in the psych ward. There seems to be a constant balance in here between ( Read more... )

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gypsy_atavari February 18 2012, 08:10:31 UTC
awwww. *sniff*

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inheritedjeans February 18 2012, 08:20:54 UTC
... Thanks! I think.

*hands over a tissue*

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gypsy_atavari February 18 2012, 08:32:10 UTC
Thanks! I liked it a lot. Heartbreaking but I'm holding out that things will somehow get better sometime. :-)

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inheritedjeans February 18 2012, 08:43:53 UTC
Normally I'd say things can only go downhill for so long, but with these boys? I don't even know anymore! :( :(

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anonymous February 18 2012, 09:32:59 UTC
Thank youuuuuu! I just gave up on checking the thread a few days ago, so this was a wonderful surprise. I am so grateful. The story is so so lovely, I love how despite the quiet tone it's brimming with emotion and unanswered questions. The OC is really sympathetic and her back-story adds so much to what's already going on there. Oh, and Sam's little daily ritual of reaching out in silence to get his cast signed, Dean signing it like a physical expression of the loyalty oath the two have always had -- that just - - that broke my heart completely.
Thank you. So much.

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inheritedjeans February 18 2012, 15:09:36 UTC
You're welcome! THANK YOU for reading and leaving me lovely words to munch on. I'm sorry this took so long--I'd meant to write it much, much sooner.

I think the thing I love the most about outsider stories is how there are always more questions than answers, and I'll never say no to an opportunity for someone to catch them at their weakest (and most loving).

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orehime February 18 2012, 09:38:43 UTC

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inheritedjeans February 18 2012, 15:15:39 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥

Thank you for reading!

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franztastisch February 18 2012, 11:41:40 UTC
Oh this is so wonderful and sad *sniffles*

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inheritedjeans February 18 2012, 15:16:27 UTC
Thank you so much ♥

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sinka February 18 2012, 12:20:55 UTC
I think you just broke me. The image of Sam's cast being signed day after day by Dean is going to haunt me for weeks and that last scene brought tears to my eyes. Both boys are so broken and hopeless, but still there's nothing and nobody else in the world for them...

Wonderful outsider POV, by the way. You really managed to make Amy a full fleshed character with a beautiful background.

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inheritedjeans February 18 2012, 20:15:11 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! I'd say I'm happy I managed to break you, but that sounds mean, so here instead: ♥

And thanks for the comments on Amy--so relieved she worked out!

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