*All of the names mean things(Ratri=destroyer, Aleron=savior, etc) *I purposely left "the boy" nameless. I don't know why, but naming him just never seemed convenient or necessary, and I think it added to him. *The story is basically meant to show how people have conflicting sides within them, good and evil, and they have to choose which to follow. I may have kind of missed this point, but there's still something of note there, even if it didn't quite go where I wanted it to. I didn't have time for another rewrite. *Its a basic tale of good vs evil in its eternal conflict thruough human nature. *Yes, it is a lot like Star Wars. No, i did not do that on purpose. I just used stuff as it came to me. But for wahtever reason, most of it matches up with something in Star Wars. I dunno how this happened exactly, but it seems to have. Let's hope the judges don't notice, and please tell me if you pick up on that *before* reading this note. Afterwards, you're biased so you don't count.
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*I purposely left "the boy" nameless. I don't know why, but naming him just never seemed convenient or necessary, and I think it added to him.
*The story is basically meant to show how people have conflicting sides within them, good and evil, and they have to choose which to follow. I may have kind of missed this point, but there's still something of note there, even if it didn't quite go where I wanted it to. I didn't have time for another rewrite.
*Its a basic tale of good vs evil in its eternal conflict thruough human nature.
*Yes, it is a lot like Star Wars. No, i did not do that on purpose. I just used stuff as it came to me. But for wahtever reason, most of it matches up with something in Star Wars. I dunno how this happened exactly, but it seems to have. Let's hope the judges don't notice, and please tell me if you pick up on that *before* reading this note. Afterwards, you're biased so you don't count.
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