Against all my better instincts ...

[ink_and_coffee]

I'm going to inflict yesterday's rough draft upon anyone who happens to wander through here.

Slings and arrows encouraged.

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Be Fruit, Multiplied

The air was cooler in the vineyard.

Don't go too fast, she said. I'm blind, you know.

Blind has nothing to do with it, he said. You're porty, and so am I. Let's sit here for a bit.And so they sat

Comments

[anti_cyclone]

I really like this: so much in so few words. I especially am fond of the silly wordplay of the title, and I'm curious to know if that's what inspired the story in the first place.

Thank you.

[ink_and_coffee]

I visited a winery not long ago with a friend ... watched people, borrowed bits and pieces of them.

This bit came to me yesterday, about 10 minutes before I had to pull up stakes at the coffeehouse to go home and fire up the grill. Some of it's drawn from real life, and some ... well, there are times when I feel almost as though I'm taking dictation.

The title came last, and wasn't added until this morning, when I felt fairly happy with the revisions.