Invisible Lines (William/Bob) NC-17

Apr 22, 2007 18:20

Title: Invisible Lines
Pairing: William/Bob (Beckett/McLynn) (No, that is not a typo)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Bob is used to wanting what he can't have. This poses a problem when what he wants wants him back. (~5100 words)
Discalimer: Not true. Made it up.
Notes: So. callsigns read an article about Bill Beckett putting gay porn in Mike Carden's luggage ( Read more... )

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robjlea April 23 2007, 02:36:56 UTC
Lynnett!

The reaction that the other 'boys' will have alone leaves me smiling. The bigups Bill gets for actually making a move and the other guys who are all why didn't I make a move?

Brendon for sure will be questioning this because I am positive that he thought about it even if he didn't complete the play. Then Spencer (younger Spencer! I am still a little thrilled with that fact) will push him up against the wall and tell him if he wants a cock to suck he has one. Distraction complete.

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eleanor_lavish April 24 2007, 13:23:47 UTC
I like the way your brain works, dude. And yeah, the rest of the boys will be scratching their heads, but not for long. Bill and Bob are the kind of couple that give off that "meant to be together" vibe.

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schuyler April 23 2007, 02:52:35 UTC
Yay! I know you hate it when people don't give specific feedback, but you already know what I'm going to say about how you made me believe in a really terrifying pairing, so I'm going to stick with yay!

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doitninetimes April 23 2007, 06:11:04 UTC
At first, my mind kept trying to pull up Bob from MCR, which was it's own brand of hilarity, but then I looked at the picture for a bit, and the second try worked much better. :) William is pretty much awesome and issue-filled without it being crippling, and Bob wants and wants to do the right thing and they are too cute when I make them go smoosh in my head!

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coldsnap April 23 2007, 07:12:47 UTC
Wow, this is fantastic!

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gobsmackit April 25 2007, 00:17:34 UTC
Bob managed to keep his distance all day and into the evening. Not a touch until after dinner, when Sisky pushed past William to get to the elevators. William stumbled and Bob put a hand out without thinking, just a steadying touch at his elbow before pulling his hand back like he’d been stung. William looked from his hand to his face and Bob saw his eyes dull even as he forced a small smile. “Right, okay,” William said quietly, and Bob had to dig his nails into his palms as William turned and strode away.
Gaaaaaaaah, right in the gut!

This is awesome, so much more awesome than I expected (which totally sounds wrong, but I just mean that in the way one means it when they're reading fic about someone they have next-to-no knowledge of). And also, I sort of expected you to do something silly with the bear thing, but you made it all serious and compelling and not lolzy at all (except for the parts that are supposed to be lolzy - love Bonnie!). Anyway, two huge thumbs up and all that. :)

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eleanor_lavish April 25 2007, 00:26:03 UTC
Thank you! William was so ready to walk away, because he didn't want to be That Guy! God, this pairing just works for me, and I am glad it works for you too!

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