This is so good. This is effin' brilliant. I was just going to go on to Pt 2 but I realized I need to take a moment and just... breathe. Wow. Thank you. Consider the whole damn thing quoted back at you. ;)
You ROCK, seriously. This is wonderful. I've laughed out loud at least three times at Adam comments. My fav line so far (not done yet but had to post):
He's already at the restaurant, waiting nervously at the table, when Adam sends a follow-up: or get her wasted and fucke her. srsly if i c u befor dawn im disssowning you.
Kris laughs even as the blush runs up his cheeks. someone's already wasted, I see.
I love this. Just... gah. I can't... words... escape...
Your characterization is just... genius. I am a huge, huge Kradam fan, love fanfic, and let me tell you that this is seriously the first time I've been able to successfully see Kris in my head. I am never able to place him in conjunction to words with a story, and with this, I have been.
Going off to read part two now. Just, thank you so much for sharing this, it's truly fantastic.
And I don't know if this is how Adam really is, but GOD I sure as hell hope so!!! LOVE your portrayal of him here! Sexy and goofy and self assured and sweet and a riot all at once. Perfect.
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He's already at the restaurant, waiting nervously at the table, when Adam sends a follow-up: or get her wasted and fucke her. srsly if i c u befor dawn im disssowning you.
Kris laughs even as the blush runs up his cheeks. someone's already wasted, I see.
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Your characterization is just... genius. I am a huge, huge Kradam fan, love fanfic, and let me tell you that this is seriously the first time I've been able to successfully see Kris in my head. I am never able to place him in conjunction to words with a story, and with this, I have been.
Going off to read part two now. Just, thank you so much for sharing this, it's truly fantastic.
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