Fic: The Old Man's Snoring

Jul 16, 2009 11:35


Title: The Old Man’s Snoring
Fandom: Star Trek
Pairing: Gen, Pike and Kirk
Rating: G. Some themes.
Length: 675 words, oneshot
Summary: Kirk visits Pike in hospital (Spoilerish for Star Trek XI)
A/N: Written for denorios, who gave me the prompt “drunken confessions," for my Summer Ficlet Request Callenge, which I haven't forgotten about. This is not what I ( Read more... )

kirk/pike, ficlet request challenge, fic

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denorios July 16 2009, 11:13:13 UTC
Awwww, I love it! Can I confess that I had forgotten about this, even if you hadn't, so this is a lovely surprise.

*squishes Kirk*

You should post this over at pike_2009 so everyone else can awww and squish you. And Kirk. And Pike. Especially Pike.

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inkblot_fiend July 16 2009, 13:34:39 UTC
Yay, I'm so glad you like it! Kirk is so much fun.

Ooh, I shall have to. And then peruse fics, I think :D

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just_jane_doe July 16 2009, 13:54:42 UTC
My oh my! Pike and Kirk are like peas and carrots, imo! You got Kirk pretty much dead-on, too! This is most excellent - thanks for sharing!!!!

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inkblot_fiend July 16 2009, 16:08:37 UTC
I'm pleased about Kirk, I was hoping his characterisation felt right to other people, too! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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jedibuttercup July 16 2009, 15:14:54 UTC
♥ One of the things that struck me in the new movie was that Pike did, indeed, seem like an older, calmer Kirk-type of Captain, perfect mentor material. I really like this little glimpse of Kirk's opinion of Pike at movie's end.

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inkblot_fiend July 16 2009, 16:09:24 UTC
Yeah, I imagined that's how he could recognise Kirk's potential. And thanks for the comment! :)

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possibly_thrice July 16 2009, 17:56:50 UTC
I love this so hard. I kind of want to pinch its cheeks and, like, drug it and take it home. THAT KIND OF LOVE. It's just so sweet, and so very much what I want to be canon, even if it's not what the moviemakers had in mind, because omgyes. And the writing is lovely too, with all the right details, and, just -- *flail*

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inkblot_fiend July 16 2009, 22:33:43 UTC
SQUEE! Thank you so much! :D

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kat_lair July 16 2009, 20:52:17 UTC
♥ x forever This was just lovely babe.

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inkblot_fiend July 16 2009, 23:25:33 UTC
Thank you! :D *hugs you hard*

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