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[Fanfiction] And Yet I Scream, Chapter 06: Epilogue

Dec 13, 2009 21:13

Title: And Yet I Scream
Part: 6 (Epilogue)
Warnings: angst
Rating: R
Pairings: --
Disclaimer: Moonchild does not belong to, nor do its characters or anything else related to the movie. I make no profit out of this story, it is written merely for fun and entertainment of other fans. Yadda yadda.
Notes: This is it. This is the end, the last part of ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, fandom: moonchild, genre: angst, character: kei, series: and yet i scream, rating: r

Comments 25

lovelydagger23 December 13 2009, 20:55:56 UTC

O.o

WHOA!! That was good, very good...*Can't find anymore words*

inkcharm_666 December 21 2009, 07:57:01 UTC

Thank you for commenting ^^ I'm glad you liked it.

themyrf December 13 2009, 21:33:04 UTC

*claps hands in excitement*
Me likes me likes me likes~

Though poor little Kei, it takes a hell of a lot to come back from that place. But he has Sho, so everything will be fluffymushycuddly in the end <3

inkcharm_666 December 14 2009, 11:00:22 UTC

*just pictured Myrf clapping her hands*
And you say you're not cute.

Thanks for the feedback *hugs* I'm glad you like it.

themyrf December 14 2009, 20:03:45 UTC

I AM NOT CUTE!

inkcharm_666 December 21 2009, 07:56:26 UTC

That's alright, darling *pets*

silveryxdark December 14 2009, 02:43:53 UTC

Wow.
I...
I'm honestly speechless.
*applauds*
I don't know what to say, but... it was brilliant.

inkcharm_666 December 14 2009, 10:57:46 UTC

Thank you so much ^^ *bows and blushes*

tsuki_626 December 14 2009, 05:44:51 UTC

good, i'm glad for this ending. peace will finally descend and the fairy tale has its only happy ending. *sigh.....*

excellent job, my dear. this is one of the most painful tales i've ever read, but that is what makes it so memorable and even necessary. thank you for writing and sharing this. <3

inkcharm_666 December 14 2009, 10:55:16 UTC

why the heavy sigh? *hugs*

Thank you for commenting, love. I'm sorry it wasn't anything fluffy ^^' But I'm glad you liked it.

Ending... yeah...

*wanders off*

tsuki_626 December 14 2009, 11:20:29 UTC

ah, well. it wasn't really a sigh of despair, more like sad satisfaction. i felt all through the tale that the only "Happy Ending" would be Kei's losing his immortality to the sun. no matter how much Sho might need him, he had gone too far down the path and, as you so beautifully expressed it in the last few chapters, he was utterly broken beyond any hope of repair emotionally, mentally and perhaps even physically ( ... )

inkcharm_666 December 21 2009, 07:55:55 UTC

If you ever have a specific request, something you really want to see written out, feel free to forward it to me and I'll be glad to try and write it for you.

I get what you mean about looking for glimpses of the inner being. I need my reading to have a certain amount of depth to it. I hate nothing more than the feeling that characters and worls are mere cardbord cutouts.

Thank you so, so very much for your review.

cheesin_crazy December 14 2009, 16:22:53 UTC

Omg. I'm so sad that I'm.... happy? I'm happy that everything bout this fic is unexpectable and yet, rather realistic. This is so good!! And original. It is like a psychological thriller story I have always wish to read or watch, but never did. This is such a sad story but I'm glad you spun it into such a way. Thank you so much for writing this. *virtually hugging you and Kei*

inkcharm_666 December 21 2009, 07:45:26 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad I was able to move beyond the bonds of fanfiction and make this a story that was original enough to catch your interest. Thank you for taking the time to review!