[Fanfiction] Moon Children Chronicles 05

[inkcharm_666]

Title: Moon Children Chronicles 05: Hero
Warnings: fluff, humour
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Kei, Sho
Disclaimer: The movie Moonchild and its characters are sole property of their creators. I have no rights to them whatsoever. This story merely borrows them. I make no money with this story.
Note: All Parts of the MCC-series are standalones and can be read

Comments

[luminous_vibe]

This is so awesome! ^.^ I love how you capture Sho and Kei in your stories, it always makes me want to go watch Moon Child again. Great job!

<3

[inkcharm_666]

Which reminds me - I also need to watch Moonchild again... soon-ish. Heh.
Glad you liked it ^^

[inner_demons_]

Except tall. And dressed well. And alive. But everything else. Ahh, what a great line :) Lines. Whatever. Loved this, as always. Keep it up.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you so much ^^

[gakkuhai]

AWWWWWWWWN! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! SO CUUUUUTE! I <3 this! Thank you for writing this!

[inkcharm_666]

I'm glad you liked it ^^ Thank you for the review.

[its_art]

This is great! Very sweet and cute and a little bit dark at the end. But still... Very in character.

However, I would reconsider a phrase you used

but seeing him go down on Chang's men

I get what you were going for, but this very much sounds like Kei is whoring himself out to Chan's men rather than beating the crap out of them.

[inkcharm_666]

*blushes madly*

You know, I think that's the thing about not being a native speaker. I stumble over stuff like that. Thanks for pointing that out. Though Kei equals sex, I would not want to whore him out to Chang's men.

Though... think of the profit...

must... resist...

Thanks for the review *hugs*

[its_art]

I figured it was a matter of ESL. Sometimes idioms slip through the cracks.

I think Sho (even young not-involved-with-Kei Sho) wouldn't want his Kei doing that. It's Chang's men after all.

And yes, Kei=Sex (look at my new icon. Even just his EYES gets me going)

*many hugs* No prob, m'dear.

[inkcharm_666]

What's ESL?

I think any sort of Sho would go on a rampage if something like that happened and...

Yeah. Now I have even more plotbunnies... actually, this one could be rather funny... *amused*

Every single part of Hyde/Kei, alone or in package, gets something in me tingly. I'm such a hopeless fangirl ^^

[tsuki_626]

i enjoyed this bit of "fluff". the humor that underlies so many of the exchanges between these 2 characters as you write them has definitely made you my favorite moon child fanfic author. in all the tales you have shown a depth of emotion existing between Sho and Kei that is very believable as it changes through the years.

i look forward to all of these stories, but i do love the cute and funny ones especially. you know how i crave humor these days. XD thanks to you and your cohort for a good tale to warm up this freezingly cold night. (it isn't supposed to be this cold in the South!!!) <3<3

[inkcharm_666]

We have cohorted for lots of fluff and... well... hot, steamy, naughty smut. Mostly that, actually. Heh.

and... *blushes* I'm glad you like my stories this much. How cold is it for you? We are currently just below zero over here.

Thank you so much for the review *hugs*

[tsuki_626]

well, you should continue to "cohort" for a long long time to come!!! ^ ^

your stories are the reason i started really reading MC fics again. they are just the best! ^_^)bb even tho' i'm not really a gackt fan very much. sometimes i just can't really look at him, especially the last few months. >.< idk.... o.O

[inkcharm_666]

You know, the same goes for me, actually. I'm not that much of a Gacktfan. I write Gakuhai if prompted, but the guy just doesn't give me any vibe all by himself. Sho, somehow, is something different for me. As far as fanfiction goes, at least, I don't have a very Gackt-ish picture in my head when I think of Sho. Which is probably weird. Kei and Hyde are inseperably connected in my mind, but Gackt... I remember plain and me browsing through the Moonchild photobook together... there were certain pictures we simply skipped. Ahem. *blushes* But I'm glad you still find my MC fics enjoyable ^^

I just looked it up, 25F equals -4 C, so those are temperatures we had over the last few weeks as well. Depending on location in Germany, the temperatures went even lower, like into the 14 F regions. During daytime though.

Oh dear ^^ I hope your temperatures went up a bit in the meantime?