[Fanfiction] Thin Ice

[inkcharm_666]

Title: Thin Ice
Warnings: angst
Rating: R
Fandom: Moonchild
Characters: Sho, Kei
Disclaimer: Moonchild does not belong to, nor do its characters or anything else related to the movie. I make no profit out of this story, it is written merely for fun and entertainment of other fans. Yadda yadda.

Summary: A small body crumbling under the weight of its dark

Comments

[themyrf]

Beautiful and terrifying.
Sickening and fascinating.

<3

Simply beautiful, yet so sad. Love how you manage to describe always new point of views to Kei's darker side.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you for the comment! I spend a lot of time pondering Kei's darker side, so I guess writing lots about it comes naturally to me. I like to portray the various aspects of him I see. Glad to know that so well received :)

[tsuki_626]

heartbreakingly beautiful. you really know where to place the dagger tip for maximum reaction. this may haunt me for awhile. but in a good M sorta way. ^_^)b

[inkcharm_666]

You... just gave me a creepy, but kinda interesting plotbunny there. *smiles evilly*

I'm glad you liked it though, and that it had such an effect on you. I was worried it'd be too... melodramatic.

[faded_poetry]

this is so beautifully written. my heart aches for Kei and then Sho, but more for Kei.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you! And don't we all ache for them, Kei especially? He's such a tragic figure. Me, I've never seen Sho as the character to root for. I've always felt Kei's story to have so much more weight.

[faded_poetry]

I agree with you. I like reading your Moon Child stories, because it sheds so much needed light into the substance of Kei's character, notably his vulnerability. Too many have been written about Sho being human and breakable, which has been played out too obviously in the movie. (Especially with the whole everybody's gone, therefore i have to die vibe going on about him) He fails to care for Kei's feelings; poor Kei.

IMO, you write one of the best Moon Child stories ever! (And you love torturing Kei so! =x)

[inkcharm_666]

I agree wholeheartedly. Kei is, to me, the character with much more weight and depth. Which isn't to say that Sho is shallow or anything, I can just delve into Kei's psyche so much deeper, and I enjoy it a lot more, too.

And thank you so much for the praise. I'm glad you are that confident in my writing abilities and I hope I'll continue giving you that impression ^^

[luminous_vibe]

O.O

This is amazing. Beautifully written, haunting, so very very sad... and just amazing.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you liked it.

[a_deux_vitesses]

This was so heartbreaking... but beautifully written~