[Fanfiction] Night Song

Mar 15, 2010 12:01

Title: Night Song
Warnings: fluff, friendship
Rating: G
Fandom: JRock
Characters: Hyde, Tetsuya, mentions of Megumi, Ayana, Gackt and Yasu.
Disclaimer: I don't own Hyde, Tetsuya, any of the other stars mentioned or anything as awesome as them, really.
Note: This is fic is for din_84 - thanks so much. You know what for. To friendship, I guess :o)

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genre: fluff, !fanfiction, status: one-shot, rating: g, fandom: jrock, character: hyde

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b_sim March 15 2010, 11:19:15 UTC
This was just...perfect, really. A perfect bit of fluffiness, friendship, humour and oh, it's so sweet. That Hyde's wife and Tetsuya's more worried for Hyde's well-being than Hyde himself is. Really, thank you so much for this fic!! ^^

Oh, and...

“I hate you.” I don't mind.

Instant ♥

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inkcharm_666 March 16 2010, 07:52:35 UTC
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked this and that the important feelings came across so well.

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inkcharm_666 March 16 2010, 07:52:57 UTC
Oh thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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delcera March 15 2010, 12:27:17 UTC
Good work! A good blend of seriousness and humor that works well. Couple of small things here and there (mostly nitpicky stuff like saying "2am in the morning" so I won't really comment on them 'cause they're not /technically/ wrong) but nothing that really breaks the flow of the story.

Also, this line? Hilarious.
"... I haven't even stolen stuff from her closet in forever."

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inkcharm_666 March 16 2010, 08:04:36 UTC
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it despite the small flaws ;)
And I just can't resist making callbacks to the not uncommon theory that Hyde wears Megu's clothing xD

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plain_ornament March 15 2010, 17:11:38 UTC
this is weird, i feel so out of practice in writing comments xD

this is a wonderful piece about friendship and trust. i think this is how friendship is supposed to be. if i can be sure that a bond of friendship wont break even if i'm not able to act on it all that often. and lets not forget the straightforwardness that one needs every once in a while from a true friend. it makes the story feel so relaxed and, quite honestly, i think this is the closest thing to reality. the boys dont have the time to stick together all day or night long as most fanfic writers or fans want it to be. but still their bond (may it be stronger or weaker than displayed in the story) obviously hasnt taken any damage.

good one, inky :P
my favorite sentence btw: "A sip or two of strong coffee turns the blur above the kitchen door into a clock, which in turn indicates that it’s 2am." <3

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inkcharm_666 March 15 2010, 17:33:59 UTC
o.O

...

O.o

...

O.O

*tackleglomps*

It's YOU!

Aw, I was so happy reading this comment. At first the username didn't really register, and then I just stared at the icon and squeed a bit in delight when my brain clicked.

You and many of the things we talked about were actually part of what, in the end, inspired this. This line in particular:
and I don't hear anything from him for almost two weeks. It doesn't worry me. We're both busy, and I know him well enough to know he's got things sorted out now.
I wrote that with you in mind, somehow, because these past few weeks were the same with us, kinda. I knew you were busy, was busy myself, and I knew that as soon as we got in contact again, we'd click just the same as before. I wanted to transport that feeling into the fic.

I'm glide you liked this. And I'm SO happy beyond words to have a new comment by you.

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tsuki_626 March 15 2010, 18:40:32 UTC
this one made me very happy. there're just not enough stories about this more realistic relationship between friends who are more like brothers. i honestly think, from various comments through the years, that this is how hyde and his bandmates interact. and that includes KAZ as well.

you did an excellent job with this. makes sense that it might have inspiration from your own life (above comments). that makes me happy too. good to know that you also have people you can trust and mutually care about like this. *big hug* ^ ^

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inkcharm_666 March 16 2010, 08:17:01 UTC
I really enjoyed writing this. Yes, I have my pairings that I love to write about, but sometimes it's just really refreshing to sit down and write about pure friendship, nothing more. About how I like to imagine these people are and interact with each other.

I'm glad it came across so well, and that you could imagine this to be "real" so to speak. Thank you honey.

*kiss* Love ya, girl.

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luthien_elric March 15 2010, 18:52:38 UTC
It's been a long LONG while since I've read such a complete fic. It truly leaves no gaps! Congratulations on writing such a perfect fan fiction :)!!! <3

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inkcharm_666 March 16 2010, 08:18:26 UTC
Thank you so much!

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