[Fanfiction]: And Yet I Scream, Chapter 04 (Moonchild)

[inkcharm_666]

Title: And Yet I Scream
Part: 4 / ?
Warnings: angst, major self-mutilation, personality issues, blood
Rating: R
Pairings: --
Disclaimer: Moonchild does not belong to, nor do its characters or anything else related to the movie. I make no profit out of this story, it is written merely for fun and entertainment of other fans. Yadda yadda.

Summary: I'm

Comments

[lovelydagger23]

That's so intense...and sad. I'm really scared for Kei and I wonder what's going to happen next.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

[larkir]

*jabs* You should've gone to sleep.

But this was good. Like, bone-chillingly, heart-wrenchingly good. Kei's total agony is well-conveyed, the pain and absolute terror in his mind almost too real.

You need to update soon! I want to see what happens next because I'm a sadist who likes seeing what Kei does in this state.

[inkcharm_666]

I can relate to the sadist-part xD We just love to hurt him, eh?

Thank you both for the feedback and the support beforehand. You really helped me work up the spirit to write this on Sunday -cuddles- I'm very glad you liked this and that Kei's feelings came across so well :)

[inkcharm_666]

-laughs-

Glad you like it!

And I'll try to be quicker with the next update ^^'

[silveryxdark]

This is absolutely amazing. It's intense and terrifying and wonderful at the same time. I hope to see another update soon.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you for the feedback!
-blushes- I'm so glad to see this well-received.

[plain_ornament]

holy ****! O_________O
youre surpassing yourself with each chapter written. both in style and cruelty. and empathy. while reading i couldnt help but wonder how many times youve been on the verge of suffocating so far... because it feels so REAL the way you write, the way you introduce yet another mind-disturbing thought. and each one you present with the according sentence structure and exactly measured flow or stagnation of words which draw the reader along this agonizing path in keis mind. the sheer intensity of keis suffering and the mental abyss described so vividly make me shudder. darkly fascinating.
woah.

[inkcharm_666]

Once.

Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm so very glad this Chapter seems to convey what I wanted to express so well. I was worried about it, because I wasn't sure I had found the right words or the right structure for everything.

Once again, thank you for this detailed review - I will try to update soon! -blush- and thank you for thinking I'm surpassing myself...

Oh no, wait... twice, actually.