When I read the headline, I honestly giggled for about two minutes because I couldn't stop picturing a head-hanging Bush wandering the globe in an attempt to get approval, and getting a bunch of doors slammed in his face by world leaders.
That sentence was way too long. Paraphrase: That's really funny.
Another thing I like about you...quality writing, with neverending self-editing. Thanks for curbing yourself, AND letting me know how you would have.
The idea of you REALLY giggling uncontrollably [I often wonder, especially in chat, if people are really doing what they say, like LOL...I know few actually ROFLMAO etc., so how much is real?] does me a world of good, especially since you're the only one to read/comment on it. Had you been to The Onion before?
Your depiction is actually as good or better than your paraphrase.
And, as I begin a sentence with "And" which is supposed to be a no-no but is incredibly effective in non-standardized writing, I should mention that your sentence was the right length...perfect even...for what you needed/wanted to say.
Dig?
In other news...again, with the icons. Stop it.
lighting up and wondering what it would be like to smoke and talk about smoke and Smoke and smoking matters while smoking with you
The sentence in which you said "smoke" about a million times sounds like a great idea. I usually only smoke alone- I think a large part of my enjoyment of it comes from the secrecy. Like I'm twelve years old, smoking out the window with a fan in the five minutes before parents come home, or something.
I'm really jealous that you can smoke inside. Stupid dorm rules don't allow it, and I tried once (by taping a bowl over the smoke detector and stuffing towels under the door) but my neighbors got suspicious. I think I may have to quit if/when it gets really cold.
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That sentence was way too long. Paraphrase: That's really funny.
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The idea of you REALLY giggling uncontrollably [I often wonder, especially in chat, if people are really doing what they say, like LOL...I know few actually ROFLMAO etc., so how much is real?] does me a world of good, especially since you're the only one to read/comment on it. Had you been to The Onion before?
Your depiction is actually as good or better than your paraphrase.
And, as I begin a sentence with "And" which is supposed to be a no-no but is incredibly effective in non-standardized writing, I should mention that your sentence was the right length...perfect even...for what you needed/wanted to say.
Dig?
In other news...again, with the icons. Stop it.
lighting up and wondering what it would be like to smoke and talk about smoke and Smoke and smoking matters while smoking with you
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Thanks.
~ Me
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The sentence in which you said "smoke" about a million times sounds like a great idea. I usually only smoke alone- I think a large part of my enjoyment of it comes from the secrecy. Like I'm twelve years old, smoking out the window with a fan in the five minutes before parents come home, or something.
I'm really jealous that you can smoke inside. Stupid dorm rules don't allow it, and I tried once (by taping a bowl over the smoke detector and stuffing towels under the door) but my neighbors got suspicious. I think I may have to quit if/when it gets really cold.
There I go again, rambling...
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