SCAPEGOAT INTOXICATION (Stephen/Jon: TDS/TCR).

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Title: Scapegoat Intoxication
Series: TDS/TCR; Indecision 2008
Paring: Stephen Colbert / Jon Stewart
Rating: Hard R or NC-17 (just to be safe)
Warnings: Drinking, alcohol (haven’t seen that before, huh), man on man action, and pre-beta’d work. Sob.
Summary: You blame intoxication, but it’s a mere stimulation of raw emotions.

Author’s Notes:

Comments

[sewingrose]

A long-time lurker of this community, but just wanted to drop in and tell you how much I enjoyed your fic.

You had a few minor word usage problems, like:
"The taste of Irish whiskey overwhelmed his taste buds (and he idly thinks about Stephen in the bad of his throat..."
Pretty sure you wanted "back" not "bad". You might want to give it one more look over, but it was still fantastic regardless.

*scurries back into the wood-work*

[inkpress]

Thank you for your kind words! ♥

Yeah, I'm gonna have to go back and edit it. I was in such a hurry to type and finish this XD

[museycaly]

Was trying to find a word to describe this fic, and the only thing i could think of was tasty.

Loved it :)

x

[inkpress]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

[nenya_kanadka]

It’ll be like having a taste of me in the back of your throat. Imagine that.

HOT. XD

[inkpress]

XD thank you!

[celli_puzzle]

Gah. Listened to "Crush" (David Archuleta - damn you mainstream!) whilst reading this and have to say it was pretty freakin' perfect ;)

I loved Jon's countdown. How it's like he's not just counting down from when he inhales the whiskey but from the moment they meet and the bomb is just waiting. I also liked the ambiguity; he doesn't know exactly what he's doing and he's very detached but he's fine with it. Your parenthetical "(lovingly?)" killed me too...and the last line, how they don't actually WANT to know? I thought it was the perfect tie-up to a fic comprising of giving in to confusion and trying to stay the same. <3 Great job!

[delphix_sible]

Super sexy. I can't really even sum it up. So i'll just say thanks XD