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[inkpuddle]

Title: A Dazzling Synthesis of Sun and Star
Pairing: Draco/Ginny
Word Count: 1617
Rating: R
A/N: The title comes from Nabokov's Pale Fire. This is unbetaed, so any mistakes are mine. Written in an hour or so because the plotbunny struck. This was originally supposed to be a Draco/Ginny/Harry, but I scrapped it halfway through and restarted and came

Comments

[mynuet]

That was lovely. I like how you've defined that there are feelings involved, and why they're not being declared or acted upon, all without having to beat your reader over the head. Is there going to be more of this story?

[inkpuddle]

*thrilled* Oh thank you! This is a wonderful review. *beams* I hadn't planned on continuing it, but since I've gotten that question a few times, maybe I will. :) Thanks for leaving a comment, and I'm really glad that you like it! :D

[flyingcarpet]

I love this-- you described the details just perfectly, and I love how you managed to get inside the heads of all three characters.

[inkpuddle]

*blushes furiously* Thank you so much! :*

[animus_mentis]

I thought it was quite lovely. There are so many raw emotions and the interventions of Harry add for some interesting detail. :)

[inkpuddle]

*grin* He is a bit of a hothead here, isn't he? Thank you for reading and commenting. :D

[lilhaq]

I liked how you didn't make Ginny completely innocent and naive...

I found you thru amimus_mentis and look forward to the next chapetr of To Wed The Enemy when you get around to it =)

[crystaltears07]

omg. loved it! you should write more! i wanna know what happens next!

[inkpuddle]

Thank you so much! I wasn't planning on continuing, but maybe I will, now that I think about it. :)

[inkpuddle]

Aww...thank you! I love your icon, btw! :D