[Natsume Yuujinchou] Stepping Stone - Matoba, Natsume

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Day #41 -

Title: Stepping Stone
Fandom: Natsume Yuujinchou
Characters: Natsume Takashi, Matoba Seiji
Rating: PG, for minor undertones of bullying
Words: (+/-) 1738
Summary: Slowly, they begin to build a relationship. Built on lies, distrust, and awkwardness. And a little bit of ice cream.
Notes: Thought I disappeared, I bet! But no sir~ I’m back

Comments

Stepping Stone

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Your story is awesome! I may tell you that your way of describing Matoba ís fantastic, but I think people might have been told you this... Anyway, Seiji is a very interesting character, as well as Nanase, even if they don´t blend so well with the other characters since they are shaped in an almost anthagonizing idea from the ones that build Natsume and some of his friends, however people would do well in remember that it is not enough to make the Matoba clan the villains in the show since in a story like Natsume's Book of friends this concept would be a little off, to say the least. The way you build Matoba Seiji and Nanase is really canon, I might say, since you respect those gray parts of their characters to build your story!

To finish my commentary, I will add that your Natsume is more than adorable, which is obviously very close to the original since this boy is my hero because of his warm and sweet personality, despite his anterior harsh life! Any hope to read more chapters from you?