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The Sound of Flight - Part V ; OT5

Jan 10, 2009 11:41

I surprised myself by finishing this part so quickly :D

Title: The Sound of Flight - Part V
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing(s): OT5
Disclaimer: The boys do not belong to me. This is also nothing but pure fiction.

All parts: Part I | Part II | Part III | Interlude | Part IV
Part V | Part VI | Part VII | Part VIII (final)
( Changmin is folded into Yunho's arms, like a kite, reeled back to where he belongs. )

pairing: ot5, length: multipart, fic: dbsk, series: the sound of flight, rated: pg-13

Comments 68

yumified_dbsk January 10 2009, 03:53:40 UTC

SPOT. Gonna read it now! ^^

yumified_dbsk January 10 2009, 04:28:06 UTC

OMG! WOOOOOWWWW 'O'
This story just keeps getting better and better! I'm dying to find out who these new people are. They know EVERYTHING! And what are they planning?
I find the connection between the 5 of them so meaningful and true.
You have to update soon! ^^

thevignette January 10 2009, 07:22:13 UTC

thank you (: i'll try my best!

thevirginia January 10 2009, 04:22:43 UTC

what a tease! ;~;

thevignette January 10 2009, 07:22:32 UTC

:) ♥

blurmeese January 10 2009, 04:25:36 UTC

AHASKJDN I KNEW I REFRESHED MY FLIST FOR A REASON.

Aha and another plot twist, I kinda expected Changmin to end up kidnapped but for him to wind up with another...cooperation? The opened umbrella, the connections, it's all really swinging this into a whole new spectrum.

Changmin is folded into Yunho's arms, like a kite, reeled back to where he belongs

Oh this line, this line is just perfect.

thevignette January 10 2009, 07:22:46 UTC

thank you so much ♥

xxnoodles January 10 2009, 05:05:51 UTC

AN UMBRELLA!!!???

*deadpans to the floor*

Oh, I don't know what it means ahahhaa. But whatever the new corporation, it sounds at least somewhat better than the Academy.. from what has been revealed.. Maybe I shouldn't, but since she hasn't hurt any of the five, even though she's been observing for much longer than would be required to inflict hurt, I think electric hypnotist lady may not be so bad?

I really liked the dream. Kind of disappointed that the MinSu and the Min giving in and letting himself be found was forced by the lady.. but that's okay. I think. -so confused- I just hope.. they'll be okay..

RISING SUUUUUUUUUN~! Hahahaha. I screamed it out partways through because of your words. XP

thevignette January 10 2009, 07:23:15 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting :D

illumnatemywrld January 10 2009, 06:00:20 UTC

new reader :)

just wanted to say that your story/plot is really interesting
one thing i don't get though, is why does changmin seem so weak? he's always the one being rescued. it makes me feel as if he has some secret super powerful ability that will be revealed later and he ends up saving the others :P

thevignette January 10 2009, 07:24:05 UTC

nice to meet you~ :D changmin does have a lot of flaws and weaknesses, but he'll redeem himself in the end!