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Sleepless ; Junsu/Changmin

Feb 21, 2009 22:03

I know it's been a very long time since I last wrote anything, so I'm really rusty. Just a warning.

Title: Sleepless
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing(s): Junsu/Changmin, Yoochun/Junsu
Word count: 1360
Disclaimer: The boys do not belong to me. This is also nothing but pure fiction.

( There is heat nestled somewhere in the centre on his chest, like a restless bird, waiting to take flight. )

fic: dbsk, pairing: yoochun/junsu, rated: pg-13, length: one-shot, pairing: junsu/changmin

Comments 80

yumified_dbsk February 21 2009, 14:16:35 UTC

Wow. This was simply beautiful. I feel so sorry for Min.
Everything you write comes out so awesome! :)

thevignette February 22 2009, 03:05:12 UTC

thank you :D

noelledominique February 21 2009, 14:39:02 UTC

"Quiet," Yoochun whispers, glancing at Changmin, sprawled on the sofa. "He's asleep." He grabs Junsu around the waist and turns him around. They kiss on the mouth. Junsu moans in his throat, a sound that strikes Changmin like a slap to the face.
omg. i am so fond of sneaky!yoosu, you have no idea. ♥

this was beautiful, as usual. :) ♥

thevignette February 22 2009, 03:05:36 UTC

i don't write yoosu often (or at all), so i'm glad you liked :D

noelledominique February 27 2009, 12:48:54 UTC

you should write that pairing more often 8| ♥♥♥

thevignette February 27 2009, 12:51:12 UTC

actually, i'm not really a yoosu fan :\ in the future i may write them as a side-pairing though :D

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fragiledays February 21 2009, 14:58:11 UTC

Awesome.

I was in the mood for something painful and heartbreaking and something to make me cry, and this didn't make me do that, but it was just ouch enough without being too much, and it was happy enough to make me feel better, and it was just really nice and,

"I'm okay," Changmin says automatically. Bearing the sin of telling a lie is worth getting that pained look off Junsu's face.

is my favourite line♥

Thanks so much for sharing♥

fragiledays February 21 2009, 14:58:44 UTC

Also, rusty??!????

I don't think so. *beams*

thevignette February 22 2009, 03:05:51 UTC

thank you so much ♥

dream_hunt February 21 2009, 15:04:02 UTC

It is beautiful.... hurts like hell. It is bitter and sweet at the same time. ♥

thevignette February 22 2009, 03:06:01 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting :D

magicmelodyx February 21 2009, 15:21:46 UTC

If my best writing could be as good s the way yo write when you're rusty, I'd be happy. Seriously.

He makes sure he does not limp, because someone will notice, and then there will be unnecessary worry all around.

Suddenly, Junsu turns around and catches his eye.

Changmin stumbles, and mentally blames his aching ankle.

This struck me for two reasons; one because that is so Changmin it hurts, and two because you make words on a screen feel more real than the emotions half the actors I see could ever manufacture. Beautiful, beautiful work.

♥

thevignette February 22 2009, 03:06:24 UTC

thank you so much for this comment, i'm really flattered :D