Drought ; Yoochun/Changmin

[thevignette]

The exams are over, and so I wrote :D I'm actually pretty happy with how this turned out. For my flist, whom I apologise for neglecting ♥

Once again, the characters are unspecified, but in my head, they were Changmin and Yoochun.

Narrated from Changmin's point of view, and this is the start of a trilogy - continue reading the second part Thirst,

Comments

[mumbles]

♥♥
And I spotted a typo. You find my wrists, then my palms ad then finally, gently entwining our fingers together. This line here!
Other than that I love it!!!

[thevignette]

thanks for pointing that out :D i'm glad you liked.

[valsamter]

I hope Min loves Chunnie the same way, 'cause in my head it's from Chunnie's POV, I might be wrong anyway

it's so beautiful, really ♥

[thevignette]

it's up to you to interpret :D i wrote it from changmin's point of view but you can read it either way, whoever you think fits better. thanks for reading and commenting!

[kriswu]

ah~at least they didn't break up...YET...
I'm glad your merciful to yoomin this time~~~^^

[thevignette]

this makes me sound like i'm always out to break them up! :D

[magicmelodyx]

You crumpled my heart in your fist and stuffed it into your pocket. I watched you walk away, helplessly clasping my hands over the gaping hole left in your wake. I imagine that you went home, took off your pants and forgot all about my heart sitting alone in the musty warmth of your pocket. You must have tossed the pants into the washing machine some time after, and somewhere in between rinse and spin, my heart dissolved.

Funny, earlier in the fic we get a statement that love can't be defined in words, but it seems to me you managed to do it just fine. You always, always do.

I like the ambiguity of this, but something tells me if we looked from the other side the view wouldn't be too different. How could you not love someone like Changmin, after all? (Mind, I'm assuming it's Changmin's POV we're seeing, but I could be wrong.)

[thevignette]

thank you so much ♥ i wrote this from changmin's pov, but it can be read from either side :D

[illuminations]

Ahhh, I really liked the simplicity of this, even though a lot of the fic itself wasn't so. Also, more people should write sex like it really is, which is that it's mostly gross and dirty and not always pleasant to read about. I really liked that you portrayed it that way.

Glad your exams are over! :D

[thevignette]

thank you! i was kind of nervous about the sex scenes in this, so i'm glad it turned out okay :D

i'm glad they are too, i'm trying not to think about the fact that in a few months they'll be back to haunt me again :\