Articulating Distance ; Jaejoong/Changmin

[thevignette]

For mrsedjack ♥ I hope that this is at least a little close to what you wanted. I haven't written Jaejoong/Changmin for a pretty long time, I just realised O:

Lines in italics quoted from the poem After a While by Veronica Shoffstall.

Title: Articulating Distance
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing(s): Jaejoong/Changmin
Word count: 1779

Comments

[whosthat]

Hi this is so goooooooooooood ♥ I miss reading your fics, ack.

[thevignette]

thank you, really ♥

[nevaeh86]

This is a wonderful piece of writing.
Thank you very much for writing and sharing it with us.

[thevignette]

thank you for taking the time to comment and i'm glad you enjoyed :)

[mikkyboom]

sdajsdkla this was so perfect and sweet and sjaskjk when jae left it broke my heart and then he came back and it still broke my heart and changmin skdjaksjdkasjdkla.

With slim pale fingers, Jaejoong pulls at the frayed ends, trying to tie them into a ribbon. Changmin lets him, and just watches him wordlessly. Jaejoong struggles, his fingers clumsy and trembling, and when he fails at a third try, he gives up and leaving the drawstring undone, he grabs Changmin around the waist. Changmin is tugged violently into Jaejoong's arms.

i don't know why but that's the best paragraph i've read akdjsk all week, i think. <3333333333

[thevignette]

thank you :))) i'm really glad you enjoyed ♥

[mrsedjack]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! :D ♥

[thevignette]

hiiii ♥ hopefully you like it? :)

[mrsedjack]

;________________________; i have no idea how you manage to make me think i'm a 21 years old korean idol, but when jaejoong left, i totally felt like that was my heart shattering right there. and me getting punched in the stomach.

i think my favourite thing about your fics is that it's NEVER EVER CHEESY. as in, changmin didn't come home a year later to jaejoong throwing himself in his arms and proclaiming his never-ending love for him or anything of that sort. and the little details. like shampooing his hair twice. i do that all the time. 8D

i need to go find that song you used, because the lyrics are really - you begin to learn that kisses aren't contracts.

and jaejoong is so mean! and so distant. i could never be with him, i'm in need of constant attention i think. 8) and changmin isn't all forgiving, which i love, but hey, what do you do when the piece fits the puzzle, huh? :)

love it love it love it. and so proud i made you write jaemin. :D

[thevignette]

thank you, i'm incredibly happy that you like this :D

i try my best to make my fics not-cheesy, so i'm glad my efforts don't go to waste :)

oh, and it's not a song - it's a poem!

♥ XD

[valsamter]

this is beautiful, really
you have a perfect way with words, don't ever stop writing ♥

[thevignette]

thank you :) i'm really flattered ♥