something like redemption ; Nichkhun/Wooyoung

[thevignette]

In the middle of exams right now, and I really shouldn't been writing anything, but today I put the bits and pieces together and finished up this thing I've been working on. It's an AU, and has some brief Nichkhun/OFC in it, but the focus is, of course, on Nichkhun/Wooyoung :)

Title: Something like Redemption
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: 2PM
Pairing(s):

Comments

[dirtyeyedgirl]

wow. just wow. i miss your wookhun, i miss them two ;_; i really like the atmosphere in here and this:
Wooyoung smiles - uncertain, startled and secretly pleased all at once. Really, Nichkhun thinks, there's nothing like Wooyoung's smile. Not sunrise, or sunset, or the first blossoms of spring, or sprawling landscapes. Nichkhun knows he's a terrible person - selfish, cruel, ruthless and heartless, but he can't help it. He gave his heart away, and he has never once thought of wanting it back. is a masterpiece ♥

& good luck with your exams!

[thevignette]

alskjd thank you, really ♥

hopefully they go fine and i'll be able to get back to writing soon :)

[xiahtic]

skldfs jesus, that was gorgeous. i love love love the set-up and how we didn't know it was an au until a little ways in (at least, i didn't :p) and ugh, your nichkhun T_____T ♥ sdkfs ugh i love it.

[thevignette]

thank you ♥ should i mention something about this being an au? idk, maybe some people would like a warning? :D

[xiahtic]

not sure, but imo i think it worked well having it be a surprise, cries. but i guess some people would prefer to know, idk? :x

[thevignette]

hmmm i think i'd better mention it somewhere then, just in case :)

[pinkfluffies]

holy shit.
just. wow.
i dont even know how to comment.
D: so awesome ♥

[thevignette]

thank you! :DDD

[rayflo]

Wow!
Amazing!
I'm out of words...
This really was touching! You write so well!!! >3

[thevignette]

thank you, i'm glad you liked! :)

[senseikk]

Wow... This was really amazing. ^^ I wish I could write like you!!

The atmosphere was so intense and suffocating in the first part when Nichkhun walked in with that girl. Although it's a very sad part, I have to say it was my favorite scene! The complexity of their feelings, the turmoil, and the extremely heavy/serious tone won me over. Gah!! So great! XD

And this part here:

Wooyoung will drag Nichkhun back to bed. He'll kiss Nichkhun, mapping his body with his tongue, until Nichkhun looks down at himself and finds that the blood on his hands has been washed clean.

(Wooyoung will carefully erase every stain, and as always, without Nichkhun knowing, he will take these sins and accept them as his own.)

When I read this I was like whoa~ Nichkhun sees that Wooyoung is cleansing him of his sins, but in fact, Wooyoung is merely transferring them to himself. Deep.. (At least to me anyways... ^^)

Just wow...

[thevignette]

thank you for the wonderful comment~ ♥