The Truth About ; Nichkhun/Wooyoung

[thevignette]

It's less than a month to my first A'level paper, so I probably won't be updating for a while. Thank you to envoler for beta-ing, you're wonderful! ♥

Title: The Truth About
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: 2PM
Pairing(s): Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Word count: 1267
Disclaimer: This is only fiction.
Summary: There's something important that Wooyoung needs to tell Nichkhun

Comments

[s1nfulxs0ul]

Argh, you have great similes and metaphors. The overall piece is wonderful. The last paragraph left the biggest impression on me as an ending. It sums everything up, from Wooyoung's struggle with telling Nichkhun, to Nichkhun's understanding.
^^ You continuously make me love this pairing even more.

[thevignette]

thank you ♥ i'm glad to have done the pairing justice!

[envoler]

you, woman, had me flailing all over the place at all the things you added in ♥

the last part is my favourite part ♥

[thevignette]

i tried my best to add to the parts that you pointed out were lacking and it really did make a difference :) thank you again~ ♥

[primroseshows]

You are an amazing writer. I don't know how often you are told this, but even so it is probably not enough. There are some lines in here that I thought were so brilliant without being wordy, like: Wooyoung exhales and lets go of Nichkhun. "Nothing," he says. and Time just passes, and That Important Thing He Needs to tell Nichkhun remains trapped in his throat, growing like weeds. and for some reason I loved the hell out of this one too: Next to him, Chansung is snoring lightly with his mouth hanging open.

And I really liked the format of Nichkhun's dialogue paragraphs. Sort of like - he speaks, then he feels something, then says something else, and then his feelings change. I'm weird in that I notice these kind of patterns, but for me your style is just really smooth and wonderful to read.

ANYWAYS TL;DR: ♥ x 1000

[thevignette]

askdjkl thank you so much, this means so much coming from you ♥ i'm incredibly flattered and feeling all warm and fuzzy from your lovely comment.

[plushietigerj]

You always characterize them both so well, especially Wooyoung >w<
This story just leaves a warm feeling with it's mushy-ness, and an amazed one too since your writing style is just so...nice? Nice isn't even a good enough word to describe it, it just flows really smoothy yet the reader can feel the utter frustration Wooyoung has.
Love every single line <3 owo

[thevignette]

thank you :) that might have something to do with the fact that wooyoung is my favourite ♥

[thevignette]

thank you so much :)