Connections ; Nichkhun/Wooyoung

Jan 13, 2010 10:57

I know it's been such a long time since I last wrote anything - I'm lazy and I procrastinate horribly :\ Hopefully there'll be more regular updates from now on, now that I have much more time on my hands!

Title: Connections
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: 2PM
Pairing(s): Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Word count: 981 words
Disclaimer: Only fiction.
Summary: I ( Read more... )

rated: pg-13, length: one-shot, pairing: nichkhun/wooyoung, fic: 2pm

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hanae_kazuki January 13 2010, 05:03:27 UTC
this is soooo sad....
and somehow vividly real...

i love the last pharagraph best...
how woo has move on..
"This may not the best moment of his life, but it does come close enough."
n i love this line

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thevignette January 13 2010, 06:32:49 UTC
thank you :) i wanted this to have a hopeful ending, so i'm glad you liked it!

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thirteenoclockk January 13 2010, 06:03:04 UTC
Your fics are so utterly beautiful. They play with such ethos, and like someone else said, the words flicker through my mind like a sad movie. But a really, really good movie. Dialogue was also spot-on. (These twoooo + your writing hnnn I can go to sleep happy)
I'm also so happy to see a post from you again, did a double take when I read your username in inorae. ♥
I'm so tempted to illustrate parts of this ;; and goodness, dying to know who it was in the last paragraph!

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thevignette January 13 2010, 06:33:49 UTC
thank you :) i'm really glad you enjoyed this! alksjdkl if you end up drawing any thing from this, i'd be delighted to see it *___*

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silentreader13 January 13 2010, 06:21:11 UTC
i read this while listening to tik tok which made it EVEN SADDER ; n ; *cries*
lovely. i like the last line very much.
i love your comparisons and your visuals...it's all very vivid and full of raw emotion. tangible.
all in all. awesome :)

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thevignette January 13 2010, 06:34:04 UTC
thank you so much! ♥

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charsomnia January 13 2010, 07:53:41 UTC
♥ I loved the ending. It made me smile because of Wooyoung finally moving on.

Someone calls his name and attempts to stuff a fistful of sand into Wooyoung’s mouth when he turns around. Wooyoung howls, yanking his feet out of the sand, but before he can take revenge, there’s sand down his back and lips pressed against his own.

I feel like this 'someone' is Junho (guilty pleasure) but it could be anyone else actually. But I really like this because I'm so thankful that Wooyoung can move on. It's like a slice of life kind of situation lol. :)

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thevignette January 14 2010, 01:33:03 UTC
thank you ♥ i felt like i absolutely had to give this a hopeful ending :)

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fauxflair January 13 2010, 11:49:23 UTC
His feelings for Nichkhun are not dust particles dancing in the air, but crashing waves - unstoppable, constant, and a force of nature.
oh my god. ♥

i love everything about this. your khunyoung, your characterization, the way you write, how each of the scene seems to come straight out from a movie - i can see it in my head ;__; thank you for writing this :) i always look forward to your updates. you're wonderful.

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thevignette January 14 2010, 01:33:33 UTC
thank you so much :) ♥

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