Posted by Gregoria44 as Inmyth is AWAY! Comments won't be picked up for a wee while...

[inmyth]

Title: She Kisses Harder
Author: inmyth
Pairing: Original male/male slash
Genre: Romance, Drama
Rating: R
Summary: Ryan and Craig have been best friends since the day Craig whacked Ryan's face with a bucket when they were both four-years-old. Now as the years have piled on, so have Ryan's feelings for Craig. Will Craig accept Ryan's affections or will

Comments

[the_faery_queen]

hmm. the story is a little cliche, but that's not a bad thing. i like the descriptions, the personality, it all feels very real

[inmyth]

Okay, I hope my reply makes more sense typed out than it does in my head at the moment. As stupid as this sounds, Ryan is basically me, well no, he's my friend, but we're similar. And I do think constantly about every damn thing. It gets quite frustrating after a while to just make my brain shut up. But there you have it, though, I do appreciate what you're saying and it does come across more like a journal entry than a fictional narrative

[the_faery_queen]

that's ok. and your friend is weird because those pills aren't that big that i think they would hurt.

i think about everything but im not sure i think about things that much. still, it's your story, and im looking forward to reading the rest so hurry up and post it! :)

[inmyth]

He's... he's a twat let's just say.

Will do as soon as I get them back from the beta reader :).

[tokyoghoststory]

i haven't read the first part of your story, so i think it's a big tough for me to give you concrit on the actual plotline of your tale

[inmyth]

I know the narrative goes way over-board but unfortunately, that's what his character is like and I hope it on't deter you from reading any further chapters.

I kind of understand what you mean and although I don't differentiate between said categories in quite the same way, I can at least tell you that this isn't meant to be following the footsteps of Christopher Rice's books for sure. This is just plain, slashy fun.

And no, your critique is very much welcome :) so don't worry about overstepping anything. Thank you for commenting and sorry for the late reply.

I'll post a link to the first part here, if you'd be interested in reading that.

[bobfirez]

hmmm....just as good as the first part! I really love the whole inner head conversations he has, it adds a lot to the story and really makes it even better. I luv the humor!

[inmyth]

Awww thank you. I'm glad you like it.

[carapheonix]

O.O I fucking love you. Lol This is gold.... srsly.... xD When you get this published.... Let me know....

[inmyth]

LMAO! Aww, you're a darling. This is just a silly story I dreamt about my friend, literally. He then said I had to write it down, hardly a literary accomplishment but I'm glad you like it nonetheless.

[carapheonix]

Lol that's how Infatuation started out for me... but it isn't... *drool*

[inmyth]

I reckon that's how a lot of fics start!

[moonlancer]

very interesting way of writing. I like the story and the emotion behind everything Ryan's feeling. I like the Stream of consciousness and the misleading way of how you portray Craig, with him being a jock and all. can't wait to read the next part.

[inmyth]

Thanks :). I'm glad you like it.