Into Temptation (2/?)

[inmyth]

Title: In to Temptation
Author: inmyth
Pairing: Original male/male slash
Genre: Drama, Angst
Summary: Kevin O’Shea and Connor Ferrera shared a mutual hatred, that is until their parents decided to marry each other. Now forced to live as step-brothers under the same roof, their hatred is starting to reach new heights but after a few secrets unwillingly

Comments

[lucentliz]

This was great, really fantastic and interesting <3

“Well…,” he trailed off and sighed. “Last night you uhh - I mean we kind of. You were drunk and I didn’t know what to do and you were so insistent. If I’d fought you off, they’d have heard us downstairs so... we errr. Anyways, I’m sure you can imagine what happened next.”
Hee!

I seriously do hope it doesn't take you another year!

[inmyth]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked and no, I think my muse for this story is kicking up a fuss so yeah. Hopefully it won't take another year to update either >.>.

[asitha]

I really like this story, the characters are great and it seems like it has a pretty good plot forming. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[inmyth]

I'm glad you like it and hope I won't disappoint :). Thanks for commenting.

[asitha]

as long as you keep updating/writing it I won't be disappointed ^_^

[inmyth]

Well see there's the problem... >.>.

Heh, I'll try.

[charisstoma]

In the next chapter are you planning on expanding on the body scars? Am assuming that there must be scars under the wrist bands but self inflicted or part of the body scars. Why oh why does he see his stepfather?
Kevin came back from Spain attitude changed and brought him a gift??? hmmm.
Yes, please get to work on the next chapter.

[inmyth]

Not in the next chapter, but the fourth one, yes. Will do! Thanks for commenting.

[nivell]

Oh man, how I really thought this story wouldn't be continued. I really enjoyed it and I also question why he should go back to see his ex-stepfather. Didn't the marriage between him and Connor's mother not work out?

Love his realistic the story is, I could just picture Connor and Kevin in my mind.

[inmyth]

I didn't continue think I'd have the inspiration to continue this either... but I'm glad you do.

And you'll find out later :).

Thank you!

[clarediva]

this was great, I liked the range of characters you brought in, male and female, different ages and backgrounds. There's the potential for melodrama, but it's v plausible too. Connor and his struggles with life came over v well, thanks for the great read!
^_^

[inmyth]

I'm glad you liked it so much and thank you for commenting :).