Fic: Not Quite Paradise [10/?]

[reikah]

Title: Not Quite Paradise [10/?; ongoing]
Fandom: Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle
Pairing: Fai/Kurogane/Yuui
Author: Co-write between mikkeneko & reikah
Rating: R
Word count: 9,505 this chapter (70,504 total. /fistbump?)
Notes: "In a future where science and psionics rule the skies, and both are controlled by the iron fist of the Earth government, two young men make

Comments

[ex_sasukich]

love the new chapter, and all those delicious hints of kurogane's past... ^^ i hope they haven't bought themselves too much more trouble!

p.s. are they going directly to europa now? are they really going to go to europa? i mean, what in the world would yuui and fai do there anyways? are we going to see any other space stations? you guys mentioned mino, kajitori and suwa... well, suwa's destroyed and kajitori's not exactly friendly, but is mino still around?

anyways, as always, love this story, can't wait for more!

[mikkeneko]

Yes, Kurogane's past... we'll find out the full story later on, but most of it you can probably guess. ;)

They are going to Europa, because that's where Kurogane took the job from the Triads to go -- mostly because I couldn't remember any of the other major Jupiter moons when writing that part and couldn't be bothered to change it later. :p It's just a coincidence that what Yuui said and the job they ended up taking were to the same place.

We'll be seeing plenty of other space installations -- a sealed habitat on an outer-planet moon is basically just a space station attached to a rock, after all. :p But no, we won't be visiting the Mino or Kajitori stations.

[eijentu]

*_______*

All I can say is that this chapter was fantastic - it just flowed really, really nicely - and I'm loving this fic so hard. I cannot wait to see Fai and Yuui and Kurogane and deep space and... klasfjkd <3

[mikkeneko]

Yes, now that they're finally away from Mars, next on the agenda is waking Fai up. *g* Hard to believe we got 75,000 words in with one of the main characters not even present...

[eijentu]

I am unreasonably happy about this - and I think waiting to wake Fai up has just made the anticipation that much greater. :DDDDD (And, hey, no complaints about length here.)

[fieldofclover]

*gargles incoherently*

TABLE FLIPPING *A* aldjasklhdfjla;;

Also, plot <3. Wow, I really like how this story is developing, and I love the idea as Sonomi as a badass gangster XD I keep feeling so sad for Kurogane as little bits of his past are trickled out, and Yuui as always is a bundle of conflicting feelings.

They way you're both describing Mars and its environment is brilliant :D I love world-building, and I love how you're constructing an plausible and interesting world :D /loves scifi

I'm just so excited every time this updates :D Don't ever stop being awesome, ladies <3

/mad tackleglomp

[mikkeneko]

I enjoyed Mars a lot! Kinda sad that we're leaving and won't be back. XD Sonomi was just a brief cameo character, we won't see her again, but I'm glad you liked her. ;)

YES TABLE FLIPPING. Kurogane should do that more often, really :D

[fieldofclover]

FLIP THAT TABLE AND THEN GET ON IT :D

/continues to love all over this fic