Echidna

[inner_kyuubi]

They meet, by fate or by chance, at a crossroads.

He’s gnawing on the joint of his thumb. Arguing with himself in his head. But his back is turned to her so she doesn’t see that. He hasn’t killed anybody today.

Her cheeks are pink, like she’s been drinking, and she’s wearing a white halter top and a tight black skirt.

She approaches

Comments

[infinitefirefly]

A;FHJALPEGHFSEGH

POOR JUUGO. ;________;

But I'm not really sad for the OC. What a ho. XD *is exhibiting Byakuya-ness again ahahaha*

I really liked the dialogue in this. Can't wait for more Juugo exposure (*SNERK*) so you can write more on him. ♥

Ahh, Kishi, you know how to piss us off but we can't stay mad because your characters are just too awesome. DX

[inner_kyuubi]

!!!!!!!!!!!

Poor Juugo is right. ;____;

XDDDD I'm not surprised in the least that you aren't a fan of her. *grin*

Thank you, Henna. ♥ Ugh. I'm itching to write more, you have no idea. So I guess that means I want the next chapter, no matter how miffed at Kishi I am. :p

[inner_kyuubi]

*spazzes*

Wahh!! Thank you so much! I'm glad that I was able to make him sound plausible, because getting inside his head was seriously the most fun I've had in a while. Which means I'm going to have to do it again soon. 8D

[bakkhos]

Oh wow, I love this. You really got into Juugo's head very nicely. It was creepy and I love how the ending isn't overbearingly gory. It has just that perfect feel to it that makes you sick to your stomach (in a good way!)

I felt sorry for the girl, though. Poor thing. I want to give her a hug.

[inner_kyuubi]

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled my characterization of him works, despite how little of him we've seen so far.

XDDD A good sick to your stomach, huh? *grin* I'll take that. ♥

Oh I know! I didn't expect to wind up liking her as much as I did while I was writing this, but there it is.

[shini_chii]

God yesss <333.
I LOVE Juugo, fanfic already = ♥.
And--- God you got the angstyn-ess, the gore, agalkgnaoigangaiohnae. Yeah, keysmashing is the way to review this awesome fic <3.

[inner_kyuubi]

XDDD I couldn't help myself. As soon as Juugo was introduced, I knew I had to write something about him, because he's the type of character I really get a kick out of playing with.

!!!!!!!!!!!!

My day could not possibly be any better. ♥♥♥

[ylmik_wisty]

Ohh, that was really good. D: Even though we've seen just a little about Juugo you really wrote him very well and believably. I liked the way you wrote how his bloodlust watches and waits. And I'm glad you didn't get too gory, though Juugo's thoughts of how to kill her already made me nervous. I hope he ripped off her head first. But probably not. DX!!PAIN
I'll keep an eye out for your future takes on Juugo. :x

[inner_kyuubi]

Thank you so much! ♥

See, Juugo is exactly the type of character I have the most fun writing about, because he has a lot of stuff going on inside his head, you know? I can't tell you how excited I am that you thought my characterization of him was believable, because now that I've written him once, I'm gonna have to do it again. XD

*grin* I thought about making it really gory, but that didn't fit with the idea of the bloodlust being a comforting thing to him while he's in the middle of killing someone, especially since the piece was from his perspective. (Oh I know. I don't envy my poor OC...)

Awesome. ♥